I know I’m probably to late, but still, could you PLEASE make a part 2? PLEASE! Thanks!

This is a great story I loved it and I think you should make another story continuing off of this one

I've read this story right here way over 6 months ago, but lately I've decided to review every work I've read and enjoyed thus far. And you definitely deserve some feedback on this work.

So, let's get right into it:
As I've already told you on the GoF Forums when I introduced myself there, this story here is THE story for me. It is the first LBT story I've thoroughly enjoyed and read two times over, I think.
It literally has everything I could've asked for. A serious plot, emotions, friendship, blood, some gore, and most of all: all the feels! Right to the end, with an almost heartbreaking epilogue.
Chomper's change into the deadly killer he is by nature is just gripping to follow and it is as saddening to see how much he struggles with it and how much it pains him. Same goes for his friends, especially Littlefoot and Ruby. Then there's your own character, Fyn, who perfectly fits into the plot via his support and some guidance.

Seriously, I would claim that your story here is one of the best LBT fics out there. To me at least, it is second in place after Rhombus' Seven Hunters saga, and I don't think there will ever be another story pushing it away from that place. Although maybe... should you actually decide to write a sequel to this, sometime in the future. If you would, let's just say I would be rather delighted. :)

Lastly, I would like to say that you really deserve some more attention, and I really hope you will still and constantly gain a few more readers. You are an excellent writer who has a feel for emotion and storytelling, and I will definitely check out an review your other stories, too!

I was wondering if you are going to make another story about Chomper after he's changed. Almost like a sequel to this story, adding to what he and Ruby will face and if he ever remembers his friends. This story was probably the best Chomper and friends coming of age stories I've read on this site. Can't wait to read future stories from you!

i love this story
please makejust or even better then this one
its like the actual seaqual the the land before time originol movie
i will love this story, now... and forever
and if you can't make the seaqual, may i please do it? please
agian
epic story
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that was BEAUTIFUL you made me cry agien
please let there be a sequal
you are epic
please let chomper reamember

stop it you epic person you your making me cry
and epic ending
i hope chomper got his memorries
epic... nuf said

not what i was expecting, it made me cry
but it was brilliant
is there a seaqual to this? say yes
if there is please let me know
if not
i will make it
whith your promision of corse
and credit will be givin
but if your making it
please messege, agian this story is epic

yayayayyayayayyayaya
how
how you so epic
and almost everyone was included this time
petrie was as i said a formidable opponent, ok i didnt say that but its true, you proved me right with this chapter
even though ruby didnt fight, she was the most usful of them all ath this point, epic shaptooth laguge for the win
but i still have yet to see ducky be of any use other then a raminder that she is asomly cute
agian you are epic

OMG EPIC!
heart breaking and awsome at the same time
i need your brain, please can i have it XD
just kiddn
i wouldnt do that...mabey
please let ruby petrie and ducky fight this time please!
there not usless

oh you are awsome indeed
you capture the charecters so well in there older forms
you should make this a movie
that would be an update to almost all those crappy sequals that were mad after the awsome originol
you are epic

epic fight scean
but why not ruby, ducky and petrie fight
there not usless in fights
ruby has a wicked beak and would be faster then them seeing as she is smaller
petrie can claw them and peck them and he is big now, not a tiny little cunary
and duckie, not to call her fat but she could probably crush 2 maby 3 of them and that tail is like a baseball bat to the head if it hits you
im just saying
there fighters aswell

i love this story :D
please tell me it has a happy ending

epic... nuf said

yay yipie
please continue