Noooooo! The cliffhanger...

This is such an amazing story. I love how you took it in that bit darker direction.
It is a really great story!

soooo amazing ! is there gonna be a sequel or not since i read this story i cant get enough of it
please carry on writing!

xxrayxx

I just finished all the chapters and I can not wait for the end. I hope you can finish this story, I really liked it!

Wow this has been quite a journey! I really liked how you built up the relationship between Gary and Misty. It was really sweet watching them grow closer in that situation, but I also kind of felt that their bonding time was kind of short ;w; This chapter in particular was like badass though with the fight scenes! I bet they must've been hard to think up and write but you did it wonderfully! xD I really wasn't expecting that to happen to Gary (well, I should've expected it) but yeah you left off at such a cliffy! I almost screamed when I got to the last sentence and then realized I had to wait until who knows how long until the final chapter(s) are uploaded xD I do understand how busy the schedules can get though so no worries about rushing ;D I also almost forgot about the magical vial until Misty pulled it out near the end here. Hehe wonderful plot Can't wait to read the ending (:

-Roze

This story is really good i hope you make the next chapter quickly i cant wait until the next chpater
good luck

Please! I wish Gary is alive, please! I love this pairing! :D

oh my god, i'm in legitimate tears right now. i remember reading this back when there were only 8 chapters and wishing there were more. it's a good thing i stumbled upon this again because honestly this made me so happy. i cannot WAIT for the last chapter (or chapters) to come and you've done an absolutely incredible job on this!

Nah, I don't hate you, though I was quite concerned there for a while! I assumed real life got in the way and I'd be a pretty shitty person if I hated you for that :)

Is it weird that I had the stand-off music from 'The Good, The Bad and The Ugly' in my head for most of the beginning of this chapter? To me it kind of felt like an old-school western shoot out, and that's pretty cool! Side note though, did all the characters go to the Stormtropper school of killing bad guys? (I kid, I kid!)

Some nice little EgoShippy moments in this one too, which was nice., though my curiosity for what's going to happen on the relationship front is nothing compared to what I feel for THE INSANE CLIFFHANGER YOU HAVE LEFT US ON! I will help in whatever way I can with your next chapter if only to get it here sooner so I can have answers! I very much like answers!

All in all, great chapter, a fantastic climactic moment and my God, a cliffhanger that is really pissing me off - what else could I ask for in a chapter?

Update! This is an awesome story and you haven't updated it since June last year. Please update, I'm on the edge of my seat!

I absolutely love this story! You have to finish it and let all of us fans know what happens. Do they die? Fight? Live happily ever after?

I honestly thing this chapter was amazing. And I was soo glad to finally hear something of Misty again. Good job, honestly. Can't wait for the next chapter and looking forward to some action

This is an amazing chapter, I'm so glad your back. You've done a great job from start to finish, honestly don't worry about the wait- it was worth it.
It's a busy chapter, but not too busy that the reader get confused, it's a perfect balance of action and angst as the build up begins. I like how Ash is trusting Gary, it reflects his anime character very well and shows the strong bond of the two males, I can wait for ash to see misty again after his attempts at the beginning to find her (sorry my slightly pokeshipping side coming out there). And Brock and Daisy are so cute together, Euphoria are in for a lot of trouble now that they're here to help too. Gary and Misty's reunion was short and sweet which worked perfectly under their circumstance and I cant wait to see what you have planned for the two next. Hopefully we'll see Gary kick some Euphoria ass :) Anyways well done, keep up the amazing work and don't worry about the wait, writers block traps us all every once in a while. Update soon?

You said it perfectly; writers' block is indeed a bitch! But you seem to have found a way around it and you have an awesome chapter to show for it :)

Wow, that was an action-packed chapter! I don't think anyone can complain about the wait if that's the result! And the first proper flutterings of EgoShipping too which was quite sweet for how short a time they had.

I also enjoyed the Ash and Gary part, those two seem to work better as friends (God knows why I insist on screwing them over so much in my stories!) and the way you've portrayed them since their reunion has been perfect, exactly as I'd imagine it.

Gary is the perfect badass! I absolutely loved him here, but to be fair I love him anywhere! I can't wait to see how the final few chapters play out with him!

Don't be too hard on yourself! This was a great chapter and I am very much looking forward to the next one. As always if you want to talk it out I'm always here!

oh my god his pokemon Dx and stuffs Dx

Oooo gary! 3