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Concept is great, only problem is the grammar

Update soon!

Wow! Your a great writer, and your story is very fluid and descriptive! I'm also a big fan of Eden Eternal and I wish more people knew about it. I can't wait to read more of the story because i'm sure it's only going to get better.

Continue Sakura-Chan!

Wow! This is a great story :) I love playing Eden Eternal, hope you enjoy writing the currently ONLY Eden Eternal fic out there, you're doing a great job.

...what do I smell? Oh, I know what it is! AWESOMENESS :D

...In all seriousness though, this chapter has a couple laughs and good parts, but I do see one major problem- It's lacking in content. I recommend at the very least trying to make these chapters longer, even if it takes longer to post them. Because after all, one thing that really helps make the readers happy is having not too little content, but of course not too much. Just throwing that out there for ya. ;)

In other words though, can't wait for the next chapter.

K, me again! I swear last chap. I did not cheat and look at this 1 for the answer that he was shadow! I just didnt find this fic untill today, sry... guess i cant get in the story... :'( *crys*... oh, well... at least i'm reading it now! anyway, i think this is my fav. chap. as of now... maybe its just cause it mostly had all boys in it, lol... anyway, i could visualize this chap. pretty well, and some of last chap. so thats good. Can't wait till next chap.! Good work and thx! -

Just finished chapter 4: um... is the prince Shadow? U said there would b a love triangle between Jas, Alex, and Shadow. I thought that if u have a prince u should put him in a love triangle u know?

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Review time since i'm here anyway...

Well, i havent read chapter 5 yet, and maybe I just missed it, but maybe u could try describing these characters a bit more so its easier to visualize. Thats just my feedback! U can take it into consideration 4 ur next chap. if u want! -

Apparently the Goss Mountains are quite disgusting (you spelled it gross :P), you apparently really like/dislike things (that section in your profile is there twice :P), you might end up adding someone to the story, aaaand alpacas are adorable. Thanks for keeping me up to date. *shot*

All joking aside, fantastic story so far. I was laughing pretty much the entire time.

...but GOD DAMMIT YOU BEAT ME TO POSTING AN EE FIC :V

...I'm joking of course. :P

(also I'm glad I'm NOT going to be able to find the name of that prince guy cause me being in the story would be disaster. Last thing this story needs is a hotheaded mage who loves to play with fire. AND YOU CAN'T GET BARD UNTIL AFTER TRANQUIL HILL :V *shot*)

what a cliffhanger I demand more! I hardly get the cliffhanger but want to find out if right

this is a great way to ship in ee fanfics. im not using my account right now but i plan on making a copple. this is good...love the story :3

continue please :D It's really interesting and yea... EE ff's? We need more :)

wow...I only read like what? 10 sentences or less and you got me sucked in. I guess anything can be interesting.