this is beautiful

Aww! That was so cute!

ARG a ghost RUUN oh it's just Trisha nothing to worry about :3 but still a ghost O_o

Love love lovelove lovelfehfihwnsvevhrh dhcskw! And i think hawkeye could make a good mama!

i had to take a few short breaks because i had started to cry... This was a lovely, heartwarming story that was wonderfully written. Great job!

that was cute and yes riza would make a great mom look how well she keeps all the boys in line and i don't mean ed and al

*struggling to stay in chair*

Okay, I'm going to attempt to play this cool, like a professional.

I have to say, that your grammar and spelling are...just...wow. Some of the best I've seen on this site, and your use of vocab is fantastic to match.

As for the actual story, I agree with you that Parental!HawkeyeEd is an underrated pairing, and I'm glad that you were able to do it such incredible justice!

Okay, now that I've given my "professional" commentary, I can start fangirling over this!

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THIS WAS FANTASTIC! I LOVED ALL THE FLUFF AND THE GENERAL PLOT OUTLINE, AND HOW IT WASN'T OVERDONE AND STUFF, AND...AND-AND-AND-

*gasping*

*sigh*

Okay, but seriously, I haven't seen a Parental!RizaEd where Ed doesn't break down and start bawling to Hawkeye in a completely OOC way about how hard his life is. Don't get me wrong, I love those, because it's nice to see Edward all vulnerable and stuff, but it doesn't really work well with his character. This was a nice change of pace!

Hmm...I just went from Serious to Fangirlish, and back to Serious again...interesting...

ahh sweet fic~

There needs to be more parental riza out there. Very nicely written :D

aww! yay! people definitely don't write enough parental riza/ed stories! good job!