This is the best story I’ve ever read.

It was well written and very sweet. I loved it :)

-Happy New Year to you and everyone! and I really liked this kind of sad the story is over though it's still a great chapter you did a really good,great,awsome job. loved this,loved the sweet Maikoness smirks alittle so,just really liked this you did a great job.

And exhale! We have closure!

Suspenseful to be sure. I love the way they worked together as friends do. They support each other and help each other.

I love the Maiko bits in this.

Sorry to see the story end but it was satisfying.

I hope when you have time, you will spin us another tale.

Good conclusion though I don't think a blade would rebound like that and have enough velocity and force behind it
to hurt anyone. But that's a small quibble and I'm sure I've got things in my stories that defy logic as well.

You've got some nice descriptions here and that makes the chapter more vibrant.

Anyway, good job, Doritos. I'm sure we'll hear more from you soon.

Alabaster

DON'T LEAVE ME!

you only did one thing wrong, by telling us that your story will end before the finale battel, YOU NEVER SAY THAT TO US!

please update, i really like your fic

Amazing! You're an incredible writter! I really enjoy your story! Good Job...

pleas don't be bad at updating on this, i really like your story hear

i L.O.V.E the ending, so cute

Amazing chapter. Loved it. Though I do personally think Mai wasn't very much IC, you did a great job regardless. :) The writing is extremely well written-to put it more accurately: fabulously written. :D

amazing chapter! Loved it. Oh my Maiko feels...3 your writing is brilliant btw ;)

I like your story! It's adorable!

Mai! Noooo Zuko comes to the rescue