Reviews for He's Not Very Good at This
Dj chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
That was amazing!
MAKORRA99 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Kay this was one of best oneshots i've ever read
InsanelyHappy chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Very cool.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
very good titlr
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I loved this moment they have together!
penspunk chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I loved it! I needed some Makorra too!
JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Wow. This is really good! I don't know what Korra's doing in the boys' apartment, but the chemistry, especially at the ending, is excellent. This is one of the few Legend of Korra stories to go on my Favorites list!
TamedTempest chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Awww. I love him. He reminds me so much of me, the walls and all, maybe that's why I feel as if I 'get Mako' so much.

Mako is a caretaker. He knows sacrifice, he knows how to do without, he knows how his priorities will inevitably fall. He knows he will always do whatever it takes to take care of those he loves. He's always been the one to fall back on; never has he looked to anyone but himself for salvation, for help.

*sniffle*

good job!
Makorrist chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
awesome! i LOVED the ending.. very good last sentence!
great gospel chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Wow. This was a beautiful, very powerful piece. I think you portrayed this scene very accurately to how they would have acted. He may not be very good at this, but he's just what Korra needs.

sora
Tukiko K chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Awww! This was adorable. Poor Korra, it's a good thing she has Mako to keep her safe.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Very beautifully written. The flow of writing was perfect and I love the slow transition from friendship to subtle romance here.
sapphiretwin369 chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Aw I really liked this! :) I loved the "As if you could do much better" and "Irrelevant" comments. And the fact that she fell asleep cuddled next to him. :D
hundredtimes chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
This is perfect!
violaqueen93 chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Wow I really loved this, I think you did a great job capturing the characters. I could see them having this conversation too. Two thumbs up.
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