Good idea for a story/nice plot, but not very well writen : it's extremely repetitive. You realy don't have to write 4 shorts senrances saying basicly the same thing, refrasing then each time, to get your point across.

Good job!

Th-that...was...*sniff*...BEAUTIFUL!*cries* aaaahhhaaaaa!

This was sweet!

I was rather hoping Raoul would be too forward and Erik would intervene and duel him, but I love what you did!

This was great! Keep writing!

I could almost hear the orchestra playing an ending theme! :):):):):)

That was sooo cute. i loved it.

Brava, darling! It was simply beautiful! I don't think it should be rated m though. If you move it under t and mark on the description "high-t" you should be fine. I only say this because I know more people would read this if it wasn't under m, and more people should read it! It is wonderful!

Awesome hon...loved it...huggs peggy

WOW! Truly loved this story, I believe too that is how the story should have went. I've always loved the movie, although I can see past the actual story of it but look at the alternatives through here. This story did it for me! I've liked the Phantom better because nobody came to understand him, only Christine, although she only felt pity for him but nothing more.

j'adore

Honestly, I think this is how the story really should have gone.

that was beautiful, i always wanted it to turn out that way. i have hated raoul, for stealing christine, since i first saw the play when i was 12.

ohh myy goooosh i love this sooo much! you are a freakin genius! i love you soo much! thanks bunches alot for makeing this happen:)

I loved it! It was so also really captured the love between christine and the phantom

ONE review! This definately deserves more! Awesomely described!