This was a delight to read...an inventive plot, neat touches of humour, elements of genuine peril, a starring role played by the weather and some engaging original characters. Truly well done:-)

God story. Like that the team was able to help the three "pick pocketers" . Then Danny and Steve running around like kids. And the girls guessing what age they were acting like.

I wouldn't mind seeing Danny/Scotts butt. And his bare chest.

Man, this story was good! My first true Five-0 fic, and it was awesome. I love stories that involve Mother Nature in all her beastly glory.

Keep up the sweet writing. :)

-EmpressAkitla

Another excellent story! I'm sorry you had such terrible weather on your vacation, but it turned into a brilliant story. :)

Another beautiful installment. I'm sorry about the weather on your trip, but personally, it made for a great story-I can't truly mourn. ;)

nice having the shepherd involved in the rescue i have one myself it is the typical black and tan shepherd or a pure colored shepherd? the one i have is white

please tell me you're not the californian..though that would be funny..

Great story as usual. Random question: who would be the real life counterparts to your original characters? i.e. Riley, Aku, etc.

Brilliant loved the whole story. Have to say I laughed out loud at the part where Steve kept walking past the goons with the ever increasing sized weapons...too funny. Such a pity you had to deal with bad weather while on your holiday. I was in Oahu in April but thankfully we only had 1 wet day. It was one of the last days and we went to the PCC. Have to say I would go back there in the morning. It's great to have seen it and now I can easily visualise all the places that were mentioned...I could picture them walking along towards the Shrimp truck. Well done you!

LOL, yes I remember The Bus... most original I must say...does exactly what it says on the tin!

I'd say WE were lucky that you had the worst weather EVER on your trip, because otherwise we might not see this story come to life! ;D
Great! Thanks.

The only bummer is that I didn't get to read your story earlier, and therefor missed all the pictures you posted.

This is the best kind of story to read; case centered, the Fab4 all present, no slash, no ship focus,... just a good case centered story. Thanks.

That was quite the vacation you had!
The day we left for Hawaii, there was a tsunami warning, because of an earthquake off the coast of Canada.

Loved Moon's impromptu bungee ride. It reminded me of S1's rooftop and shark cage moments that seem to be long gone on the show.