Very nice story, I really enjoyed reading it. I was confused about Rachel and Samantha and I realized they are supposed to be the same person but it was weird.

Grammar? Good. Writing? Clunky. Concept? Mediocre. Dialogue? Mediocre. Character depth? ...

Overall

3/10

Wonderful story. Thank you

good story, thanks for sharing with us. I loved the bad ass Bella and Rachel. it was an interesting story. thanks again

Forever eternal love Bellice 3 Thank you for writing this fantastic, badass, cool, amazing, wonderful and brilliant Bellice masterpiece! I really enjoyed it~ Wolf Bella n her Vamp Alice 333

BELLA AND HER PACK SOOOOO COOL BADASS

That’s a great conversation

I’m melted and feel warm with this chapter

Oh god I’m so glad and grateful everything’s gone be alright with Bellice

I love it!

Surprise! hahahaha

Ok, I love the story but is Bella's friend actually named Rachel or Samantha cause you keep switching them out?

The names changing between Samantha and Rachel is very confusing.

Well this chapter made no sense whatsoever and felt really out of place and tone with the rest of the story. You gave an angst chapter over something that would completely be a non issue. Strange. Also the constant Samantha/Rachel name mix-up in previous chapters really needs editing. Like the fic anyway though

Damn...