What an amazing story! Love their journey together and how Myka was the only person Helena ever loved!

great story. a really neat idea and I liked what you did with Myka being the one Helen fell in love with in the first place. it wasn't what I expected when I started reading, but this kinda serious (in parts actually funny) and seemingly very accurate plot was very well-written and thought through with care.
however I would've liked to read a little more about the tension betweem them once Myka returned. it was resolved rather quickly and my little Bering/Wells heart would've wanted something more.

either way, good read. thank you.

To answer the questions posed by the most recent Guest review (can't reply directly as 'guest' doesn't allow that possibility):

1) "If you used the 1899 death of Christina, then how come in chapter 1 Helena said she joined the warehouse because she missed Christina, before 1898?"

Answer: She's not. She is actually quite pointedly saying the exact opposite. She mentions joining and missing Christina - but I never said she joined in or before 1898, so I do not know why you thought so. Interestingly, your objection is right but for the wrong reason - the dates for the story are indeed "off", but not because I violated my own established timeline. It is because the show's timeline(s) aren't in keeping with each other! So, it was either create something different or try to find a way to excuse the show's lack of continuity and I chose the former. ;)

2) In chapter 3, when Claudia asked who E. Cigrand was Helena explained it was her friend from 1893. So why was she confused in this chapter [Chapter 24]?

Answer: She wasn't. In Chapter 24, it is clearly evident that Claudia is the ONLY one who recalls the name - pretty much the exact opposite of what you're thinking here. If there is any area that I can think of that makes you think she didn't know the name - it's the "shrug" she gives, but that's about something else - neither she nor anyone else is understanding why there's an argument happening about Emma at all.

In chapter 3, when Claudia asked who E. Cigrand was Helena explained it was her friend from 1893. So why was she confused in this chapter?

If you used the 1899 death of Christina, then how come in chapter 1 Helena said she joined the warehouse because she missed Christina, before 1898?

love your style of writing, and the content... great sanctuary/warehouse crossover... Fantastic characterization!

Thanks for the story. The story idea was excellent and the execution good. I felt like the ending was rushed though and would have been better if there were a few more chapters. I thought you would have Myka at least not temporarily not remember what had happened in the past which would have created some interesting situations. Also I would appreciated a little more details on H.G. and Myka getting together in the present day. It would not have had to be smutty, but that would have been fine too. It would have be nice to have the intensity of the connection more clearly shown in the present day at the end. I hope you will do more stories. Thanks again.

This story was so good, I had to buy the book.

Brilliant!

great job. very smart and in character. great imagination

Wow, absolutely loved your story. Have just recently come across this show and these fantastic characters; Myka & HG. Look forward to reading your next story.

Oh my God, this is one of the best Bering & Wells fic I've ever read. You're briliant, really I meant it.
I did enjoy read this one. The thriller, romance and funny moments. The inner thought of Helena is so funny.
I suggest they (the show) make this one to the real episode. I meant your plot is amazing. It took me several chapters to realize that it was Myka in Emma's body Helena had met, had fallen in love with.
Though I expected more in the end, like how they explain for the other. But the end was not so bad, cute I must say. Anyway, thank you for posting this incredible fic of Myka and Helena.

AMAZING story! Just incredible.

Very, very well-written, well-planned, complex, and a happy ending to boot! I LOVE it.

Chapter 19...WOW.

Finished Ch 7 now, and I am absolutely delighted with the references of Lestrade and Irene Adler. Having not yet read the Sherlock Holmes books, I resorted to Wikipedia, and laughed when I found how Pete was being described: "quick and energetic but wholly conventional, lacking in imagination, and normally out of his depth"

Well done! My only regret is that It is nearly 3:30 AM, and I can't put down this "book" you have created. :-)