I love it! Interesting plot, brilliantly written, captivating dialogue. And the ending made me smirk. A lot of people make Jotun!Loki weak and really sensitive because all his life he's been considered an abomination, but you wrote him exactly the way I imagine he would be: sly and cunning, a trickster trying to impress his father. But despite that there was emotion, and the relationship of Loki and Thor was amazing and greatly handled. Well done!

His weakness is... LOKI! XD

NOOOO! Damn it! and here i was thinking, 'Aw! Loki, for once in ALL the multitude of fictions i read with this pairing u're a nice guy.' And then BAM! I'm proven wrong XD Oh well...we wouldn't love him if he wasn't so...Loki-like! XD
I have to say i really enjoyed this fiction! It was an original approach and one i hadn't thought of before reading this! OwO Great work!

Loved it

Damnnnnnnnnn! This was so good!

I was blown away with the ending.
Continue please

Fantastic! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I loved the ending!

Indeed. Beware of tricksters, even if they're divine.

Loved it - more please :D

You probably hear this a lot, but you should seiously consider a sequel or another chapter to this one.

Man, this story needs a follow-up

I just have to say, wow.

Mind-gasm, seriously. Your story; the way it was written and the literary of it were simply incredable.

Reading this was a pleasure. Thank you for writing this wonderful piece.

:)

This was great, I loved it :)

Please continue! OH PLEASE, continue this.

You sneaky bastard. I love it!