I am looking foward to Chapter 6.

update don't leave a cliffhanger

Plz update

I know the CRA is like TABOO in this story, but I really don't see how naruto is supposed to bring back a clan with ONE girl.. You've stated (several times) that he's hung like a god and has stamina that NEVER runs out (which kinda contradicts how tired you make him ALL THE TIME) but in either case, he's not not gonna re-populate a clan (which was big enough to make a MAJOR village)... unless hinata spends the rest of her life on her back! And he NEVER leaves the bedroom! I don't say "harem", but two to three girls is completely ACCEPTABLE... It only makes sense. (just NOT older girls... WHICH KINDA DEFEATS THE POINT... and NOT non-shinobi girls (again defeats the point) )... So NO: kurenai, Anko, Kin, Tayuya, Sakura, Temari, Tenten, Guren, Konan, or Mei.. Those all ARE TOO OLD or not REALLY shinobi!

"can we talk somewhere else"? FOR WHAT PURPOSE? They are ALONE on an ISLAND in the middle of NOWHERE! (IN A SECRET VAULT!) ENOUGH with the delaying tactics! (at this point, aren't they KINDA REDUNDANT?) (at some points in a story, you need to just DROP stuff...ALL secrets ARE OUT.. EVERYTHING is GONNA BE KNOWN... Having the villains TRY MORE OF THE SAME?... DOESN'T WORK.. And yes, mito is quickly becoming a villain if she doesn't PULL HER HEAD OUTTA HER ASS!) Konoha SUPPORTS the uchiha (why? Is kinda beyond me.. Considering there isn't ANY deeds that support that).. Uchiha (even without what's written here) are TEXTBOOK villains.. I mean almost CLICHE... So if the village aren't flat out ENEMIES, they are "henchmen" that need butchered anyway. The ONLY way to save them, is their entire governing body (yes that includes the third) needs to go "bye-bye" along with the last uchiha and ALL of the population "re-educated". (I can't call it "brainwashing" since that's ESSENTIALLY ALL they do in the academy, I mean seriously, they teach them NOTHING of being a shinobi.. AND ONLY history... BUT fail to mention the clan whose SYMBOL they all wear?... How is this ANYTHING but...BRAINWASHING?)

The naruto/hinata stuff is cute, but she's really coming across as an UTTERLY incompetent ninja! I mean really, he has to even save her when she can't "keep footing" on a boat? That's just getting a little BEYOND "weak" isn't it? I'd be SERIOUSLY questioning putting her in the chunnin exams! (because she's had her life "saved" now 5 times on THIS ONE mission... That's getting a LITTLE redundant isn't it? Did she suddenly forget absolutely EVERYTHING she's been trained to do since birth?) There will be teams SPECIFICALLY "gunning" for her in these things, and if she can't even fight some civilian bandits without getting her life saved? Does she REALLY need put up against NINJAS? (that would be a GLARING "no", it's bad enough with sakura, but here, even her teammates weren't fast enough to keep up with how quickly she got into trouble!)

So they sent mito a letter saying about the new additions to exams (which doesn't make sense in the first place because it's only for ALLIED nations) but they didn't tell her about naruto LOSING HIS CLAN STATUS? Even though she's ALSO A RELATIVE and so is TSUNADE!? How does that make any sense? And if that's all it takes to send letters, then why didn't jiriyia know EXACTLY how naruto's life has been since birth? If it's just " letter written... *poof*.. letter received"? Also why don't they just contact Tsunade the same way? Have the toads deliver a letter to the slugs. (or have the monkeys give one to the slugs) for the slugs to give to her immediately.

If whirlpool had these "great defenses", why didn't they just station a rotating team, to just "pick off" whomever got through the whirlpools? Seems kinda easy if they were all lined up... (long, narrow corridor, you stand at the end with a machine-gun... YOU WIN) Replace each as they run out of chakra.. Or use chakra batteries for a recharge. Eventually the nations either run out of soldiers, or they run out of people willing to be fed into a buzz-saw for no reason. (that's the problem with making the uzumakis "too powerful" they DID LOSE... So apparently there was a crack in their armor somewhere.) (probably, konoha... either willingly *which seems unlikely* or by their stupidity.. They are IMPOSSIBLY stupid as they are written in the beginning).

Why is minato around? If nothing else... He's an OUTSIDER! Personally I don't believe he should be brought back... He put konoha (the shit-hole) above his family... That goes against EVERYTHING of the clan... He should STAY DEAD! Let the MORON stay dead and KNOW that IS THE COST of "choosing POORLY!". I don't hate minato... BUT he has to understand there is a COST to every action... He SCREWED UP (kinda HORRIFICALLY) And when he died, "it was time to pay the piper"... There is NO forgiveness, no reprieve, no "take-backs", no "mulligan"...no "justification".. He picked WRONG... Now it's time to "pay the COST"... The uzumakis I can see returning.. After all it is a POORLY understood bloodline... But him? (he's just a f**k-up)

The byakugan CAN see through the "hidden mist" jutsu, it's the sharringan that CANNOT. I mean it's called the ALL-SEEING EYE. I also don't understand the kids doing all the fighting... Mito could MULCH this idiot... And with kurenai as backup? It would really be just kinda pathetic. Not only all that, but hinata and naruto are faster then zabuzza, heck naruto is faster AND stronger, after all he was just ripping tree trunks out of the ground and tossing them last chapter... Zabuzza can't cross blades, or block someone like that.. He'd powder his arms! Finally, consider the edo... Mito (and the other two) now have completely regenerating bodies, (making naruto's and kabuto's regeneration powers look like a joke) AND absolutely UNLIMITED chakra... (they really, truly can NEVER run out, no matter how many "tricks" they pull out back-to-back.)

Actually, it really doesn't make any sense to hide naruto's heritage... From the people anyway... I mean every ninja in the village that's above student, has a bounty on their heads... And naruto would have had a LOT more protection with his heritage KNOWN... I mean the hokage let out the "big secret about the kyuubi" but protected the other half? That kinda makes NO SENSE AT ALL. (it's even kinda a crappy "plot device").

"he's in a clan"? SERIOUSLY they were all told that like THREE or FOUR TIMES, last chapter(sasuke even had a temper tantrum)! Seriously... How many times does it need REPEATED!? Also why is the hokage putting up with sasuke acting like a spoiled child? He's supposed to be an "adult" now, this behavior is UNACCEPTABLE and needs PUNISHED!*especially since he's acting like that in front of a client!*(and he wonders how his village has turned into CRAP?! Because he needs to PUNISH more! He allows EVERYONE to walk all over him! The people need to learn to FEAR the shinobi in power again!)

I also don't get sasuke (or well anyone's) thoughts.. They're egotistical.. NOT delusional... Their not supposed to be totally "dig-engaged from reality". Even orochimaru isn't THAT far gone (obedito is in possible)... Sasuke at least should know, A LOT has been kept from him and SHOULD NOT be happy!

You can kinda tell Hiruzen is a PATHETIC leader... His village has fallen APART and he can't even tell the difference! (are you sure it's tobacco in that pipe?) Every single security measure set up for the village (the jinchuriki being the baddest, being tied to the ruling class, the barrier, only one leader... ALL of it fell apart because of that senile, COWARDLY, IDIOT!)

"red-headed blonde"? AGAIN this an either/or situation.. You have to pick 1! Authors really have a problem with that and I don't understand why... I never understood the reason to turn him into a ginger.. But I guess it fits some kind of twisted logic (why not have the spikes turn red?) The very fact that ALL the clan heads KNEW minato and naruto is his CLONE is disturbing. That they can't put two and two together without it being TOLD *spelled out* to them is very disturbing. (would you hire idiots that can't figure out BASIC tactics?).

Most fanfics have the village going in a way, I don't think is physically or LOGICALLY possible. (you've heard the phrase "you can't serve two masters"? I assume.. Well, between the diyamo, the hokage, the "civilian council", the "elders", the "clan elders", and their clan heads... MOST are serving 6...

Which makes NO SENSE. It would collapse.. Way before the timeline of the series).. You gotta take MOST of those OUT of the equation, simply LOGISTICALLY. Nobody would KNOW who to follow! And that would lead to anger, frustration, betrayal and BASICALLY the "warring clans age" again(which is supposed to be the villages stopped...)...It's why in canon Hiashi paid absolutely NO ATTENTION to what the elders thought/cared.. they CAN'T DO ANYTHING... It's why naruto DOES marry hinata (there has to be a "focal point" for the village.. which HAS got to be one individual, NOT COUNCILS or other non-sense) the kage... Otherwise the ENTIRE system BREAKS down.

How is sasuke still important to this story? Except as a villain? Which if you consider canon, he's not even that effective as a villain if naruto doesn't GIVE A CRAP about him. think about it: he's saved from committing suicide on wave(which even sakura wasn't weak enough to do), he's saved AGAIN by naruto, he's saved by copying lee, he saved AGAIN by naruto against garaa, (this is without COUNTING snow, waterfall, the race or ANY missions in which naruto had to *save* him.. without naruto... Sasuke has been DEAD since he became a gennin basically). He so much "plot armor" it's pathetic... (and obvious)... Just kill him off, take his eyes and give them to more "worthy" individuals (no I don't mean naruto... the last thing he needs is "cursed eyes")... BUT to gai or lee? even one eye would make them almost invincible in taijutsu.. to kurenai? Nearly unstoppable in genjutsu. Many people could use them BETTER then he does.

My main question, is "if they KNOW for a fact, the uchiha are a problem, always have been a problem, why is sasuke allowed to continue to exist"? Wouldn't it be easier to just get rid of him? NOTHING has changed in all the years (in fact they got worse) so what exactly is the point of having him live? So far NO STORY ever, has given me a logical answer other then "advance the plot" which isn't good enough... I've read dark/light/grey naruto stories and yet NONE of them can give me a SINGLE reason. "one child falls.. the other rises"... Naruto in MOST (not all) stories RISES (he's the title character) so one child must become MULCH... sasuke...Sorry, but it's the whole "balance" "yin-yang" thing.

How does naruto being in the CRA possibly affect Sakiri? Her daughter can't get both him and sasuke.. THAT makes no sense, *THEY* would be in it, not her daughter. (besides, no man worth his penis would "share" a girl, that's just stupid)

Think about it.. NOW they should be terrified of naruto.. TRULY terrified of naruto.. He's got the BIGGEST demon in the world in him, he's got the MOST POWERFUL allies ever, he's got the MOST powerful family name in the world, and they have ABSOLUTELY NOBODY they can complain to, or do anything about, and NOW? He's got an axe to grind with all of them! There is nobody they can even PRAY to.. their "savior" has come and he's pissed at them! (not a good position)