I've been kissed countless times, and there are still times I want nothing more than for my husband's kisses to never end.

Well, that escalated quickly. I enjoyed it.

loki soooo naughty XDDDDDD

I came twenty times

I absolutely adored this piece it was fluffy yet erotic KAWAII! :D LOVED IT :)

it seems that this could be continued maybe?

The beginning was really funny and the end so sweet! Great job!

Suuuuper cute. I love how Loki was caught in the act. Very nicely paced and sweet!

Wow... :3

Wonderful.

i liked the story. Very sexy, very descriptive but not TOO obscene. (heh)

Um... one thing. the author tends to switch between past tense (as I hugged him) to present tense (as I hug him) quite a bit. This makes the story a little confusing, but it's a minor thing.

all in all in execution I would give it an 8 out of ten, but only because of the verb-tense and the fact that it was a short story and it's realllllllly hard to add in character development to a one-shot of any kind. That is what seperates the hobbyists from the magicians. (i am, unfortunately, simply a hobbyist writer.)

(if we were to talk about how I personally liked the story, i'd give it a solid 10 and ask for a follow up ) but as a reviewer I must be a little bit of a stickler and attempt constructive criticism.i suck at it though.)

Write some more! 8D

Wow. Just... Yes.

This was. Wow. *faints*

Yay! My second ever Thor fic! Also a naughty one, ehehehehe. That was yummy, I just love uke Loki, he is so cute! Zomg, especially with BIG strong Thor...Nom...Nom...ehe.

Enjoyed this! Good job!

O_O Awesome... Just perfect :D Tihi.. This one is going to be read more times xD

Ah it was very nicely written, I enjoyed reading it! Sequel wouldn't hurt, like the morning after? [why no one ever write it oTL ]