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Well, if Marvel Thor was such as you make him to be, exile to Earth never would happen. Do not think, I'm not complaining. Actually I like your Thor much more than Marvel's. It would be great if he was really so. Then everything what happened in the first movie would have not happened (because I do not agree with your vision for the rest of the aesir and their opinion on Loki. I find it hard to believe that all Asgard dislike Loki - as I love to say: there are as many opinions as people. I rather believe they are considered Loki as always-second-best by default, because of his unusual - for Asgard - ways. Or there would be rebellion the moment Loki took the throne (in the movie). And the guards handed Gungnir not Frigga but Loki (and I have not noticed any wishing to edify / instruct new regent in such difficult times - that speaks of confidence). Though of course there are those who reasonably fear cunning and shrewd second prince: And self- critical person as Loki certainly more notice negative reviews than otherwise. I agree with common opinion that Loki just want to save Asgard from Thor as a king (who probably start the war on second day his rule) cause he do love Asgard and understand burden of the rule the way that Thor didn't. Yes two of guards were killed but they They were who they are - the guards. And they guarded Vault Weapons - which, in my understanding, is mean that they had to be the best of the best (they were the penultimate line of defense if the enemy has penetrated so far into the palace - the last was the Destroyer itself. So the words about how they were taken by surprise and did not expect jotnar to show up one day, for me nothing more than an empty phrase) ... I just thought that this is probably one of the reasons why Loki decided on this - he did not expect that the guards to die. As far as I can tell that Loki expected that in the heat of anger Thor will try to break the direct prohibition of their father about visiting of Jotunheim, and he would be detained by Heimdall, before the arrival of Odin. But then Heimdall - who claims his loyalty to Allfather - committed treason by allowing hotheaded Thor go in the forbidden realm (and ease with which Heimdall did so leaves me with the feeling that the gatekeeper not once indulge heir's desires. Probably I will not be wrong to assume who was one to rescued - probably not once - Thor and his cohort from the deserved punishment - and hardly saw any kind of appreciation for it: it's so not honorable to equivocate and dodge. And yet Sif's appeal to Loki showed that they expect him to get Thor - or them, or both - out of trouble). And then Warriors Three and Sif, who supposed to know Loki for centuries, violated the will of two kings (proving that they are true - blindly and reckless - not to Asgard, and not even to their king Odin, but to the one who considers appropriate to start a war due some insult ... This is instead to help the one who are supposed to be their friend, when on his shoulders fell the burden of kingdom and military conflict, and all this on the basis of Sif's conviction in her own rightness, Hogun's support and no real facts on their hands. And neither Sif nor Warriors did not tried to reason Thor (those sluggish protests do not count), or otherwise distract him while his anger subsided.

Interesting twist; eager to see where this is heading!

Oh dang; things are hitting the fan! Looking forward to next chapter!

Ah, Loki. The moment you started to fall. If only someone could pull you back up again. We all love you despite how Marvel depicts you. Great job on the story hun. Keep it up. Love ya!

So that's what happened to them. In this episode, Loki starts the investigation toward finding out his Jotun heritage. He doesn't know yet, but he will soon. Keep up the good work hun. Love ya!

It was a good chapter; keep up the great work. Hope the writer's block passes soon :)

Oh my God, I am so sorry! I haven't reviewed for a while (a long while), and I'm sorry I made you wait. Anyway, great job on continuing. Twenty-four (or twenty-three) chapters and astill going. Good job. ...So things are happening, Loki isn't 'evil' (thank God (or you, rather)), Thor had a pleasant adventure on Midgard, and now what is this? Thor returns to Asgard only to find that something has happened to Loki and Sif? What has happened in Jotunheim? Guess we'll find out in the next chapter, eh? Love ya!

Nice an update. I'd almost forgotten about this story. I like your interpretation.

A great story so far; I love the changes you made, epecially in terms of Loki's part in the story. Plz add new chapters soon!

nice story, i'm on chapter 10 now.
but just some advice, i'm not sure if u forget to do it or something , but when someone asks something , you forget to put "?" and when someone yells, i've noticed that you don't put "!". don't forget about those..
otherwise, cool story!

Hello, I've been reading your story and I can't believe how good it is! Please write more (reading slowly so I don't get to the end and have to wait for more) please write more! I see so much potential and I love how we finally get to see Loki's scheming mind and reasons behind it! Love it *muwah* it's just amazing! :) looking forward for more (please, please please!)

Sweet connection between him and Jane starting to form. Just thinking out loud, I love the Thor movie and Avengers was amazing. But what has always confused me ( I know little about the Thor comics) is Lady Sifs thoughts as Thor falls in love with Jane.

Well done so far. I really like how you are getting into the head of everyone and explaining the "why" to everything. I would get someone you know maybe to read it over for a few spelling errors. For example you write they instead of the although that is probably a mistake of the spell check you were using :) Keep it going!

Well written battle sequence.