I really like your version of "Neighborhood Watch" and especially your finale. Certainly far better than the TV version. You have the gift of storytelling in your blood and you're a true Densi master. Thank you.

I really liked this. It was so spot on for both of them in how they admitted their feelings for one another, especially Marty. I really wondered how long it would be before Marty would stop dating other women. and just concentrated on Kensi. Very good job.

I love this! You've captured them both so well & it's such a good dovetail to the eps.

Absolutely loved your story. This is how the episode should have ended.

Love it. Nice switch-up of first and last lines.

oh i love this FanFic so much. thanks for writing it!

Such a great story! Are you thinking of writing more about that episode?

Aww! Super great story :) I know I can't wait!

Btw, your neighborhood watch-based stories are great, you should consider writing one about 'mutant ninja assasians!'

Very romantic! Love to read more!

Amazing!