daaaaaaaaaaaaqaqaaaaaaaaaaaamnnnnnnnnnnnnnn so hawt. you chronicle my sexiness well, mortal.

Faaaaaaangirling lol Loved it, loved it, loved it. :D

Ohhh, I like this. A lot. A few typos here or there, but you have a good writing style that flows well without being basic. I am definitely interested in seeing what else you have planned for this! :D

Woot! I still can't believe this is your first fic. The intensity of it surprised me, and the interactions between Loki and Thor were so intense and emotionally charged. It was always a fantasy of mine to see what would happen if the tables were turned, if Thor let Loki do what he wanted to show he loved him. I love your story so far, and I am eager to see where you take it. Great job!

agree

drowning in the thorkiness here

very cool .

Definitely like this :) I'm in the process of writing my own ThorxLoki fic as well. Was wandering around trying to find a little more inspiration. And this helped a bit :)

Awesome fic! But where's the rest of it? You do plan on writing another chapter to this, right? If so, I'll be waiting. _

hawt damn! oh my gosh im feeling a little light headed! that was truly awesome! is this as far as you are willing to write? cause i would be grateful for more plz!