paranoia is good sometimes

Oh man this was just awesome! Great one

My heart was in my throat when the van doors flow opened I was like " Oh Shit " and as I read the part where Scott kicked the man that was driving in the head I yelled " Way to go Scott ".

THIS IS SO CUTE I LOVE THE WAY IT WAS WRITTEN AWWWW!

AHHH! I love prego Nell!

Yay! I'm so happy you updated! I loved this chapter, I could definitely see something similar happening on the show! Can't wait to read more!

Very nice chapter! Poor, oblivious Eric, he just didn't connect the dots. Great job!

Well I'm still so mad at Sam for his behavior in the finale that I can't possibly like him right now in anything. I've never been a huge Sam fan to begin with, but right now it's at an all-time low. This was a very sweet if predictable story. As strange as I feel saying it, I liked the Densi one better because I feel it has more POP. But it's still quite good and I absolutely cannot wait for the next one.

Eeeeeeep! Hehehehhehehe when you read this at 3:45 in the morning it makes it all the better! Love this! And it gave me an idea for a Neric fic :)

Awesome story. You set yourself a tough format in this chapter, (#7: signs) and I think a little more backstory would have helped, perhaps even eliminated the need for the author's preface at the beginning.

aww that was so sweeeeeet. i really do hope we dont have to wait until season 10 for this to happen in the show

Love this! I would love to read more of this story!

Perfect! Super cute! I think you hit the nail on the head, I can absolutely see Callen and Sam and Deeks saying all that - especially Callen!

Hahahhahaha love it! I would love to see this on the show.

Aweeee! And... OREOS!