This is amazing, I’m in love with this! That was so cute!

Dave my hero! Saving Sebastian from creepy guys...
Now Sebastian wants to "return the favor"

I had read the first part a long time ago and it's even better than I remembered it. I think you captured Sebastian's impulsive and straightforward attitude very well. It might have been hard to believe he would turn on dime and go for Dave so fast but here it makes perfect sense.

Having him ask "Are you hung?" was just delicious. Completely in character, I could hear his voice saying it as I read it. Two thumbs up!

I also loved Dave, his guarded nature came through here. I liked that you portrayed him as a guy still kind of a slave to his hormones, thus likely to leave with Sebastian when... appropriately persuaded... :D

HOT!

er... ahem... OK, on to reviewing... I love it how you humanize Sebastian here, and how Dave comes off as a really decent fellow (makes them both more real, and more likable).

awesome but cockblogged in the end

There's chapter 2, right? :)

Loved it :p

Wow! That was super hot, please tell me there will be another chapter yes? I sure hope so!

Wow, this was hot and I loved it :) But why did it have to stop :(

Amazingly hot! Damn the fact that it's complete. I would have loved to read a lot more! :D

You know how I feel about this already! But anyways I love how you captured Dave's feelings in this and how he's so new to it all. It's refreshing to see and I like that you made Sebastian a little bit more human. Not much but a little. I think the use of Dave's real name in that one part shows a little bit of maybe he doesn't always think of Dave as Liberace or Growly or Bear Cub.

No but... why did it stop?

AMAZING!