I don't trust this fanfic whether it has lemons or not! Do you even care that children will kill themselves after finding their childhood ruined and that their parents ditch them just for birds and bees? Because I care about children and if they have committed suicide because of lemons then I don't blame them because I want to kill myself too. I hope every lemon obssesed brony dies and goes to hell or jail!

I can relate with Rainbow on the 'making girly noises'. I squealed louder then I should have and screamed in a high pitched voice 'OH MY GOD IT'S LIKE PONY PROM OR SOME SHIT'

Nice job! I love your writing style. It is super interesting and different. You didn't just copy someone else's you made up your own. Applejack and Rainbow Dash make such a cute couple and I never would have thought to put them together.

ok this was a great story! i had a good time reading it

Perfect ending line! I loved this story. Rainbow Dash X Applejack is one of my fave ships. My second fave, actually. (First up there is Rainbow Dash X Soarin') Yeah, great descriptions. Good job sneakily including other ships in there. Lol.
GREAT STORY!
-NovemberChild13

A speck of dirt in a sea of diamonds* is what I meant. Also I'll take this oppurtunity to say great work again. Really impressed.

Wow. That was just...amazing. The writing was great, the story was superb and the ending was the icing on the cake. The only error I saw was when you forgot to capitalize the 'a' in Applejack but that is a speck on dirt in a sea of diamond. 5 stars.

Wow. That was just...amazing. The writing was great, the story was superb and the ending was the icing on the cake. The only error I saw was when you forgot to capitalize the 'a' in Applejack but that is a speck on dirt in a sea of diamond. 5 stars.

You just made my day 20% cooler.

Adorable! Love it!

I can honestly say that I've never read a fic quite like this. It was...interesting :)

That was beautiful. )

Really nice one. It was adorable and sweet at all. And thanks you didnt make any clop here. You should write more and probably think about longer fic.

I saw this is your first fanfic on this site but I dont belive it was yours first ever. It contain lots of positive emotions and I really liked it. And I died when Fluttershy used her 'special shampoo' :)

Write more, mate! /)