I absolutely love this story! It is very well written, in my opinion. Loki stories are my favorite, and this is honestly the best I have read.

I really hope you get a sequel to it up sometime...?

Happy writing!

I am missing the happy ending... but I liked your story. I particularly liked your version of Loki.
I didn't like that she ended being sterile. That was very cruel.
I think the issue about her immortality in a world of mortals needs to be sorted out.

It’s rare on this site to find a story that has a well-thought out plot, substantial character development, true-to-canon characters, few and far between spelling and grammar errors and the syntax is on point.

I love your work and wish you would’ve written the sequel. I will forever be a fan.

WHERE'S THE SEQUEL?

fun chapter! I found the turkey description so fascinating, I actually looked up a recipe for dummies (we don’t celebrate Thanksgiving in Europe, so I have never had one) and discovered a minor plot hole: apparently, a very large turkey requires about 5h in the oven, plus all the time for the stuffing etc. So it would have been impossible for them to serve it at 1pm after a late start.

Exciting beginning.

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I liked the story- not a good ending though. It just seems unfinished

LOVED this sweet and well written story. can't wait to read more from you.

I really enjoyed this story and I have written an ending in my mind. Your writing style is wonderful. Thank you!

okay, so, author? hi. I'm Ella. and I DESPERATELY NEED A SEQUAL PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE! I'd KILL at the chance to Beta read too! just sayin lol

actually tried to look for the book on amazon lol

I just finished reading the fic. The more I read the best it got, plot and style wise.
I was so pumped for the sequel, and there isn’t any! I would love to see them reunite, and what about the bit about a life for a life, and maybe she does end up pregnant, and why about the blonde succubus, and...?
Dude! I’m so happy I have read this fic, I just want more that’s all.
Hope somewhere sometime you do write it, or something else.

Will there be a sequel? Oh please please with the cherry on top *puppy eyes*

I just finished this and realized there has been no sequel