| Reviews for Sun of the Archer Book I |
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   Detsella Morningdew chapter 1 . 18h Okay rough plot, but more time should have been spent on Harry's initial reaction. It does, of course, matter how long he had been at the Dursleys, but if he was in school already, he should already have some sort of mental "defense" at being told he is special. Psychologically, being special in any way means pain/neglect. So there should be disbelief here, even if (especially if) he sees truth in what is being said. Then again, I don't blame you for not writing such a scene. Those things are hard as a general rule. |
| Dark Neko 4000 chapter 19 . 7/11 What will happen next time |
| misherukuro chapter 19 . 7/7 Loved it! |
| Kalynnblack chapter 8 . 4/25 really an eleven year old having sex? even if she aged him it's still weird. |
| DittoVonDegurechaff chapter 3 . 4/14 Please try keep his personality consistent |
| Biernasek chapter 19 . 11/3/2019 That is one of the best corssovers i read and i really thank you for healing my eyes after reading HP/naruto crossover... really is there at least one author that will not nerf MC or Make his enemies op it;s really sad. |
| TinyFox2 chapter 1 . 12/8/2018 Oh gods, at first I thought 'sun' was a misspelling but Merlin you're a genius |
| era-romance chapter 1 . 9/19/2018 not the best |
| Ares Peverell-Slytherin chapter 10 . 8/15/2018 Die Hermione! Let her die! Let her die! Let her shrivel up and die! Pls |
| andjelija.nenic chapter 14 . 6/6/2018 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 19 . 4/11/2018 In general it's a fun story. I suppose the only fault I find it are personal preferenced of my own such as that flippant attitude, the mostly pointless eyes thing, the typical Annabeth pairing, and the overall forced feel of most of the story, Lily Potter once more being the good parent with the James being the bad and the evil inferior sibling. What I do like is the confident harry, the more involved Apollo, the Clarise pairing, the positive connection to Artemis, the sword bow magic combo and especially the monster hunting. It's fun. |
| Nate chapter 10 . 12/14/2017 Shitfic. I'm out. |
| Ethan Illinois Jones chapter 8 . 11/15/2017 Um, Aphrodite he might be physically 21 but HE IS STILL A FUCKING CHILD YOU PEADOPHILE! |
| StarKurama chapter 19 . 10/25/2017 love this |
| Neulach chapter 9 . 8/9/2017 Harry is 11. His balls probably haven't even dropped yet. This entire sexual romance thing is really creepy. And that shit with Aphrodite was super rapey and pedophillic |
