Keep it up! I love it!

ok, and waaaaaaa im so happy! this turned out soooooo much better than bing sad about damas being dean in jak 3 thank you!

Loved

Wow, I loved this. I love story that have Damas somehow living but every other story that I've read were Damas lives Jak tells him the truth and Damas believes it's the truth, heck even I kind of do that. so this was nice change and even when it was a bit sad the lines cracked me up because they just seemed so right to me and I love the ending. Over all this story was grate.

P.S. thanks for favoriting one of my stories, I don't think I would have found this one if you hadn't.

Aww! That made me want to cry and smile at the same time! I just love it so much!

Excellent story! I really liked it.

Ooooo, I really thought the end was a happy/sad moment :') I wanted to cry but instead I just smiled :D I really loved this and now that I think about it, Damas probably would act just like this if he had lived because I don't think he would just out-right believe him or anybody else if Jak said he was his son or if somebody else said it. Or he might be like all those other fanfictions I read and believe him right after his (very) long story. Anyway like I said, this made me almost cry (but in a good way) and I really LOVED it! :D

Some dialogue seemed out of

Oh My God. I freakin Love you!

This is... This is pure genius! I love this so much you have no Idea!

You said there will be a sequel to this? You are awesome, amazing, and epic my friend. I can't wait to read that.

You have earned an instant FAV!

this was one of the best fanfics about what happen after jak 3. It was sad and happy and very well writed. I hope that you will write more about jak and daxter series