Nice job, love it

I can tell from this that your were trying to clear up some kind of blockage. The big mystery is that Sam leaves him because she' pregnant and unsure about their relationship. I could be missing something but thats a little bit subdued from what you normally do. I found myself wondering why Sam would leave him anyway. Why deny him a chance to know his kid? Not one of my favorites but as long as getting this out helped you, then I look forward to your next story.

this was great

don't stop it here though keep it going at least for the trip back to seattle

I'm a bit lost... all please?

Seriously, this story is like one of the BEST! I mean, I am impressed on how you managed to put such an intricate and wonderful story in just 6 chapters! I am truly amazed! I so love your characterization! It's so light yet you could feel the tension in them. Sam and Freddie's characters are golden! I also love Melanie here! Carly is a bit ooc i think but that's fine. The secret she was hiding justified that for me. Anyway, can you please write some continuation in this? I mean I LOVE THEM SO MUCH! I love you so much! Oh ky gosh! You need to make another story based on this! This is like golden! A treasure! Your way of writing, your build-up of tension, the scene change, everything is abso-fucking-lutely perfect! Just, just perfect! Please make another one!

I was right! this was a great story!

Nice. I love a happy ending.

I really really love this story and it's soooo gooood :D

A very cute whirlwind ending.

This chapter was perfect! There was so much action but we found out so little. Frustrating, exciting and lovely!

I enjoyed this despite how short it was!

Melanie and Freddies' friendship us a really fantastic addition and I'm just so excited to see this story unfold.

That was hilarious! I adore your surprises.

Well done. I really like how this chapter spelled it all out. Whats next?

HA! It was a kind of lame chapter, until the last lines