i'm happy now! i read this story AGES ago and really wanted to read it again but didn't remember anything about the title or descrption so when i found it on your profile i was really happy! it's just so cute! Soul is so sweet and little insecure maka is kinda extremely adorable!

Cute little one-shot indeed! I think you outdid yourself. :) Great job, I loved when Soul pressed kisses to Maka's eyelids. It made me grin.

D'aaaaaww! That was cute.. cx

Soul is so sweet! Awww!

Awwww Soul's a keeper :3

That was so incredibally cute and I am so glad that you wrote it with good grammar and spelling. I find that after spending so much time on fandoms where the writing is better that I am less tollerant of bad writing styles, but I really liked yours. Something else I loved was the way you wrote her head conversations and what she thought of the events. Soul was totally cute! I adored your ending!

-Ash

In school we r not allowed to open this but I fanfic cant hurt ;) anyway I loved it was adorable okay waaaaay toooooo adorable !

Awww!

What a perfect SoulxMaka moment!

Sincerely The Sign Painter

I don't like to be seen as a makeup freak but I cannot go out in public without mascara! Having people see me without it though when I think I'm not going anywhere...*cringes* but my friend told me I looked good, so yay! :D anyway, good story, nice writing.

AWW that was sweet, nice story :)