this was cool ;)

Awww, how cute. It really sounded like eleventh.

Ha ha. Loved it.

You have never written anything that I haven't thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks.

"that explody hair" IS THE BEST DESCRIPTION EVER. This was so wonderful and I am absolutely in love with this story. Your writing is hilarious and adorable and in character. Molto Bene!

LOVED THIS! Oh man, it was SO GOOD! Ahhhhh.

another great story

Give in, Doctor! You know you want to!

Awwwwww! Silly boy!

Great work! I think you did a great job capturing the Doctor's thoughts.

Wow, this sounds just like him. I can hear Eleven's voice throughout the whole thing. I particulary love "dandeliony". What a great Elevenish adjective. And so perfect for River's hair.

And this whole part:

"Ooh, but then, she said... He wasn't going to think about that. No, really, he wasn't going to think about that. Much. Not at all. Maybe. Sometimes. A little bit. Really? "

It's just so exactly it! Especially the "Really?" I can just see that's right where Canton asks what's going on and Eleven practically jumps out of his skin.

I would love to read your interpretation of what goes through his ADD brain at "eight for you, hunny"...

I just watched the referenced episode again last night. Perfect timing and spot-on musings.

This was a really cute story and exactly how i imagined the 11th doctor to feel around then