| Reviews for Battle Paramour |
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   Troublesome Kitsune chapter 3 . 8/28/2017 Ugh Just Update Goddammit |
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/11/2017 UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE |
| Velshard chapter 3 . 1/14/2015 I think it's less the chapter that sucks and more your writing style. Overall you have a solid story here so far and as such I've decided to follow it. But your writing style is highly informal with average grammar, this results in a little too much cultural bleeding that does blend well with the base elements of the source material. Basically the use of highly informal phrases or statement using a speech pattern or dialect common to modern pop culture doesn't fit neatly in the Naruto Universe when used frequently. Usually this can be easily solved by rewording any line that seems awkward when being read out loud, but as with all things "Your Mileage May Vary". |
| Cthulhu-On-The-Moon chapter 1 . 9/8/2013 The overall plot of the story is amazing, and I also love the situation Shizuka is put into. This has the potential to be one of the best stories I have ever read if you would just update and keep the story going (sad face). Well if you do I will be ready and willing to read it! |
| Gold Testament chapter 3 . 7/14/2013 Why haven't you updated in like a year? |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/21/2012 This will be a great story. Please update ASAP! |
| santino chapter 3 . 7/6/2012 Like the story! can't wait to see what happens next, update soon please! :) |
| Jonathan-L-Seig chapter 3 . 6/29/2012 I LIIIKE IT! |
| davethedark chapter 3 . 6/3/2012 update soon :D |
| ChaosMagemon chapter 3 . 6/1/2012 I love this fic, ever since that filler ep Shizuka has been one of my fave kunoichi. She's an amazon (Purs). And if your looking for requests how about one where Shizuka and Naruto are at the hotsprings on a mixed bathing day |
| TheNotSoPedoBear chapter 3 . 5/29/2012 great story your last chapter wasnt so bad good build up of action :) keep up the good work XD |
| Sabaku Ookami chapter 3 . 5/27/2012 Does the chapter suck? ...Nope I think that's just your thoughts on it. It was pretty good. Starting to look like Shizuka will tear Sakura apart before long xD |
| Brandon chapter 3 . 5/26/2012 You know you have a great story here and I would like to see you continue it. |
| Lazyman12 chapter 3 . 5/25/2012 This is pretty good description about Sakura personality. I mean really she more selfish and jealous induce then most characters in the Naruto universe. I absolutly love how you add Shizuke in the story. If I may I really would like to see how She and Tsunade interact with each other. I mean come on Tsunade is like Naruto Motherfigure in the Conan and in the fanfiction world(well most of the time). Anyway I will like to see what her point of view with Sakura and Naruto relationship is. Defiantly keep uploading. |
| wolf191000 chapter 3 . 5/25/2012 A lot of drama but that's just what makes most stories and this one peeked my interest. I wonder how things turn out. |
