Plz dont do a love triangle. I love Jay and Nico. There so cute!

Alright I suppose. I'll add the story to my alerts.

Question.

What exactly does what you're CURRENTLY thinking have to do with memory? I don't really understand how in the name of everything that is holy, can she read what people think? Sorry, but a daughter of a MINOR goddess shouldn't be able to do that, especially when reading minds hasn't got much to do with memory, as memory is something you remember from the PAST.

I hate your laptop!

It doesn't matter if you stole it its good and that's all i care about

Other boy. Nico, Jay, and another boy. Just, don't let her do anything stupid. Plus, make sure she ends up with Nico.

:OOOO better not make a new story o.o i will distract u from thiis one ...

Okay, thanks for telling! :3

you have got to update soonnn! loving the plot!

love it [love strawberries]

So... Your going to start updating regularly? If so... I MIGHT just forgive you :P Oh who am I kidding, I can;t stay mad at you XD. I'm just really glad you updated. And I thought the chapter was great! Stay awesome!

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Thank you for using Artemis E.! xD The real Artemis probably was kinda mad that her brother had a daughter named Artemis...

this is amazing :p and thanx 4 reviewing my story btw :D

my OC :)
name: Elise Faye (or u could use her nickname victoria or tori)
gender: female
Age: 15
looks: straight brunette hair, light skin,big forest green eyes, small mouth, and shes very slim(in otherwords beautiful)
weapons: a handmade sword that is all white with gold laces at the edges and a emerald on the handle, also has matching bow and arrows
godly parent: hecate (goddess of magic, witchcraft, the night, moon, ghosts and necromancy.)
bio: before she went to camp half blood, she had an older brother who died protecting her from a minatour, they were runnaways
personality: she never plans anything but somehow always turns out right. shes voilent to her ememies but nice to her friends. she has a weird sence of humer and laughs at the lamest jokes. shes really stylish but never wears pink. shes bothered and anoyed by aphrodite girls who always hits on her boyfriend from the apallo cabin whose name is david. the opposite of shy
oh and lol, hope this isnt too much to ask for, but could she be jays bestfriend and one of the main charecters? u dont have to add these parts in, but i really hope u do :D I REALLY HOPE U LIKE HER!

I'm loving the story so far :)
The prophecy sounded quite prophecyish in my opinion
So no more illegal mind reading from Jay :D?