update soon

Bonsoir

Super début mais je vois que sa fait un moment qu'elle n'a pas était mise à jour , vous comptez continuer ? Car je suis vraiment curieuse de ou sa va aller merci

Bonne journée

Wow. Love it. Really really hope you'll write more soon.
Love Marie.

okay, i love you, just for the winchester-reference in chapter 7.
the story is really cool, i haven't read many twilight-ff's with humans, but this idea is great. even though i kinda want to know what this idea would look like with vampires.
if you have the time to update this story, i would appreciate it

I can't wait to read more, absolutely loving this story

Good stuff! I am thoroughly enjoying your take on Twilight!

Im gonna be honest. I hate twilight. Never could get into the books. I decided tovread this only because I love all you other stories. However, I am SO glad that I decided to check thus out because its really good!
Keep up the amazing work!

I really am enjoying this story. The plotting is really good. Overall the story is well-round with only some spelling errors. Please keep it coming. I'll be watching for it.

Great chapter! I loved getting into Bella's head as well as Edward and Jasper's. Excited for you to continue on!

Nice. The last comment made me laugh cause it is just so twilight.
Your story is beautiful. Not many authors do such a beautiful story about charlie and bella's family love for each other in such a heart touching way. I really love that about this story and it is so far the only family based story I truly have loved so far.

Nice chapter. Update as soon as you can, please. I'm really, really loving this unique story of yours.

Aww, very sweet ending to this chapter. Very touching and amazing. Again, worked on the commas in this chapter. There are some slightly confusing sentences in this chapter. Also, you're talking about clothes, not cloths. You need to fix those mistakes as well.

Good chapter. I forgot to mention in the last chapter that you need to use Charlie's official time when Officer Williams and Sargent Bradley addressed him at the station. Charlie is a Sheriff or Chief of Police, not an officer.

As for this chapter, you need to work on your commas, there are many sentences in this chapter that need it badly. It's slightly confusing when reading. Also, you kept saying cloths when the word you're looking for are clothes. You started saying the correct word at the end of this chapter, but the beginning is where you need to fix all the words.

Aww, sweet ending to an awesome chapter. Onto the next chapter.

To answer your questions about the last names, Renee's maiden name was Higginbotham. And once she married Phil, it became Dwyer. Also, shouldn't Officer Williams addressed Charlie as Chief Swan at all times unless told not to? It just seems impolite to me. Plus, Charlie may be an officer of the law, but his correct title is Chief, not officer.

Other than that, I have no problems with the chapter. I will read the next chapter or two tomorrow.