Oh, man, this was the cutest thing. I love that Nelly was willing to believe in whozabobbles. Also, props for not using nargles, as everyone else in the fandom seems to.

This made me go all mushy inside. Absolutely wonderful!

Saoirse

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This is made of adorable. Amazingness and adorable, and I wish there was more of this because it is beautiful and fluffy and makes me feel good inside.

I especially love how you gender-bent everyone. Not just Longbottom and Lovegood, but everyone. I'm so glad you found that picture, because this needed to be a thing.

As far as the writing goes, it is very vivid and the voice is very strong. You don't sound like a narrator telling a story, you really capture the character, and I really love that about your writing. You also really show us the setting through the little details and actions of the characters. I really enjoy your work. If I had to suggest one thing to watch out for, it's word and idea repetition. Not that I can think of a particular instance in this story, but I know I've noticed it in your some of your pieces.

But yeah. Super adorable and cute and amazing. :3

Oh, that was cute! Strange, but cute...