My RedCheshire heart. Its exploding ! Great work.

Just read all 7 chapters, and it's brilliant! I loved the integration with the canon material, and I felt that that made it even more enjoyable. Connection was seamless, and story was well written. I only hate you a little for not writing about their relationship in the 5 years between season 1 and season 2 haha!

But thanks so much for making a truly enjoyable read.

Boring...

Evil always prevail...

You fail to showcase the truth instead preach falsity of peace and happiness -.-

I am absolutely thrilled by your fanfiction!
The way you weave your own ideas around the relevant episodes was really nice I am completely in love with your dialogues - they really made me laugh :)
You have a very nice writing style and I like the fact that you write out of the third point of view but nevertheless keep Jade the main character. The title was also very fitting and well thought as well as the idea about including Cheshire into the whole mind control thingy in order to help Red Arrow. A very nice idea of yours to bring both of them together!

I will enjoy to read more fanfictions of yours,
Elvira

I kept tearing up every 5 seconds while reading this. The quotes, the imagery, the feelings this fic invokes from a person is painful, but so, so realistic that it makes you wanna hold onto it.

Even if its gonna hurt you again and again.

Thanks for creating this fic. It's a great gift to the pairing and I hope to see more Jade/Roy fics from you in the future.

ArYa

MIND BLOWING

This is sooooo amazing. Everyone is in character, and you portray Jade and Roy so well.

Amazing! Totally, totally amazing!

That was sooo beautiful1!

My favorite part was every single scene with Red Arrow and Cheshire

I love this. My friend sent it to me months ago and I kept putting it off, but now I regret doing so. This was just beautiful, it filled so many gaps in Roy and Jade's relationship that we don't see in the show. Amazing.

beautiful story. Brilliant how you picked up on the subtle cues in the cartoon - how jade seemed to be working at cross purposes with sports master, how she hung back when he fell in the river, how she wanted to help him.

The last chapter is admirable very heartfelt

Awww... *sniffles*. I loved it! Please more...

Impressive work.

Wonderful story! Are you going to make a sequel about the Five Years and how Jade became Roy's wife before he became all obsessed with finding Speedy? I hope so! This story is amazing!