this is all an interesting twist on everything but one thing, the Irish. I know you translate at the end but it's really distracting to have to scroll down to the bottom find what it means and go back everytime. Just a bit confusing.

Story is great. It's a little late but I'm glad you're okay and with a good family. I hope to read more from you.

Oh no! Why is freya modred's older sister! *despair* pls update soon! Luv your fanfic!

Draiocht means magic or witchcraft

Great update :) can't wait to see what happens next :)

I don't think anyone could or should blame you for the time it has taken to update this story. I am glad you have taken the time you needed to get yourself back on track. People can be harsh, but don't listen to stupid people. Take care of yourself first, then take care of your stories.

Update soon, please

noooooooooooo , you cant kill Lancelot!

Great update :) sorry to hear about all that is happened to you but glad to see life is getting back on track :) one error I found was you misspelt Emrys early in the chapter, but otherwise great work! :) and say thanks to your twin for forcing you to write :)

Chapter 5 is amazing

Great chapter!
Although, in not a big fan of cliffhangers! ;-)
I hope you and your siblings are doing alright.

Hello there, Chameleon here.
I must say, the description of this story intrigued me, and guess how surprised I was to find that there was Irish in it, too!

Being from Ireland myself, I've been learning the language since I was a child. There are quite a few grammar errors, but they are easily overlooked, since you don't speak the language.

But I just needed to inform one, on principal, really, that the language is not called Gaelic. That's the name of a sport.
The Irish for the language is 'Gaeilge', pronounced 'Gay-el-gah'.

And, because I'm writing this I may as well answer the mission. Draíocht means 'Druid', or 'Druidic'. Depending on it's use, it could also mean 'magic' or 'charm'.

And if Hunith is to call Merlin her child, it would be 'Mó grá', and for father, it would be 'mo athair'.

I hope that this story continues to be impressive, and I look forward to finding out what happens next!

-Nutty Chameleon

No don't kill him, it was so sad when he died :'( think of poor gwen
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i really dont care who you kill off as long as it isnt merlin or arthur :)

Arhysgfjgujysrfgvbsudjb :o I can't wait to read more! XD