If you had made a third version of this story, would Nero have gotten the Balrog devil arm from Devil May Cry 5, while everyone else got the other devil arms from that game?

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Id say instead of water for isobu itd be cool to do coral, its weapon could be a great shield that slams down n causes a mass of coral to spike out simliar to the dead bone pulse move

Shizune, you could at least pair Vergil with someone powerful, like Mei.

Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.

cheytac intervention m300...
ah I see your a man of culture as well

that was good keep the chapters coming

Read first paragraph and become really disappointed..to make this story incestous you have changed the original naruto...let's change his name and give him your name or can't people write story about naruto neglect fic without incest..and i don't care if you do that but changing the whole naruto for that? Than what is the reason to read it anyway?

i liked this fanfiction it was great

There must be a hell gate somewhere in the elemental nations

I liked this story but I hate Incest so im not going to conti ie reading btw With Narutos background he should never forgive them becouse what they did was unforgiveable
and he should off hate his sister also
kthxbye

It was good make more chapters I've already read all the chapters please make more

Now I know why I stopped reading this piece of garbage, second chance my ass you Kishimoto loving son of a bitch.

please stop writing in pov

hmhmhm interesting so far.