that was so cute! i love the way Loki had his mischiefvous moment at the end and how Thor was still so caring twourds his brother tho im a prideful olivarry fan i also like thorki this was a very good fanfic

What is the last sentence supposed to mean?

Compared to being your first M/M, it wasn't a bad start. Forgive me for adding some comments, though.
First of all, tiny thing but related to the characters, "There, God" would not be an expression they would use. Use "gods" instead as these guys are part of a pantheon with many gods and they don't give a damn about the one-god of christianity.
There was a line from Thor's mouth that was utterly OOC: "I do not care what these pitiful humans think". It is very unlikely Thor would ever say anything like this about his own friends!
Thirdly, it was a funny part with Loki trying to reach the book on the higher shelf but actually you forgot he weaves magic and it would be piece of cake for him to retrieve it;)
And last comment, there was no preparation before the penetration which is fine but then it should be mentioned that idk - Loki was loose:D

Nice! Funny how they didn't get caught

oh gosh! I seriously enjoyed this fiction! XD (maybe a little too much...X3) Very well written and OMG, SO HOT! XD Nice work!

this was most certainly HOT
and very sweet
thank you

ppfffff. i was the one sneaking around the bookshelves and watching them, he he he...

no kid you, i really loved this story, it was nice, i only wonder when this is finding place and in what concept? like is loki friends with the avengers or is he a sort of prisoner or help guy and stuff

Ok I read the reviews and yes this was omg hot and to some of the grammar Nazi s,, this amazing sexy story is not a government document. Its not the declaration of independence...is a fucking hot pwp between Loki and Thor. You are amazing author and did awesome with everything,I personally don't pay attention except for the amazing plot

wow...i'll try to visit more libraries because of this XD

I have to wonder though: was anyone in there? ah, them lucky people...perverts! XD

An excellent read - very well written for a first smut ;). And i love your book choice - i can actually picture jamie fraser as thor!

This was absolutely brilliant

DAWWWW! This was adorable!

I loved it soooo much. :3

Looking forward to more.

You are amazing. This story gave my tummy butterflies. The spot underneath my thumbs started to tingle and I had to stop reading a few times so the feeling goes away. That only happens when I read something amazing. And your story, was amazing. If this was your first try then I can't wait to see when your experience. I think I will explode. I loved it. Really, good job.

Oh God, yes, I was right to look for that kind of fanfiction, these two ARE insanely sexy together.

A very good OS!

“Thor did the same, although his hair hardly looked any different than it usually did.”

Ahahah, yes, Thor's hair is the most magical part of his being, that is common knowledge ;)

This was so hot, just... wow. Great story :)