Reviews for Broken
Guest chapter 3 . 8/29
I love you for making this, but I also hate you for making this
angewomon143 chapter 26 . 5/18
I hope u finish this story out someday
kidlinkwindwakerryona chapter 11 . 12/22/2019
Love this story so far and would like to see more. It's my first time on this site and I love this story. Avatar is one of my favorite series and I like what your doing with this version so far. I had some ideas for this kind of stuff before too but I hadn't thought of one for Aang though. He makes me happy everytime I see him smile and laugh. I could imagine something like this happening in the story and each moment hit me as if I was watching it take place in the actual show. I've recently started rewatching Avatar the last airbender and I wondered what Zhao would've done to Aang if the blue spirit hadn't rescued him. I could see him doing something like this.
This is good chapter 26 . 9/22/2019
I really wish you would finish the story, but I understand how stressful life can be. Just remember that there are still people out there who appreciate your work, and when you’re ready, we’ll be waiting for it’s completion.
Coral.iturbe chapter 6 . 2/9/2019
Wow...eso fue rápido...pero me hubiera gustado más que se hubiera tardado un par de días en encontrarlos
Coral.iturbe chapter 4 . 2/8/2019
Puta madre...no puedo creer que esté leyendo esto...estoy enferma
Guest chapter 26 . 8/9/2018
Sorry this is like...a super late review. But I totalllyyy understand the college stuff. I'm a student too so I can sympathize (although I can do nothing more than empathize with the rest of your situation). I just hope you still check notifications so you will see this review!
I absolutely love this story, I am definitely hoping that someday you can post the sequel to this story about Aang's recovery and defeating Ozai and moving on with his life. As much as I love me some angst and torture (damn I'm sadistic) I would love to see poor little Aang have a happy ending. I would definitely like to see him admit what happened in detail to the rest of the group that doesn't know so they understand the depth of the situation and how they can help him.
I definitely love the interaction between Zuko and Aang and I'm so glad that Iroh is with them he is one of my favorite characters!
But anyways...good job on the fic and I hope life has been treating you well!
Guest chapter 14 . 6/17/2018
Katara is so annoying xD
Axientyisme chapter 1 . 4/22/2018
WHAT DI YOU MEAN COMPLETE
Axientyisme chapter 26 . 11/25/2017
OMG PLEASE UPDATE IT I WAS HEARTBROKEN WHEN YOU STOPPED UPDATIND3
fanatla chapter 26 . 11/24/2017
Pleaaaseeee... update Broken.
Thank you.
253910 chapter 26 . 11/24/2017
Happy thanksgiving!
VengefulProphet chapter 21 . 7/12/2017
Good morning to everyone,except the person who wrote this
jose chapter 25 . 6/13/2017
I think this Is a very interesting story and it really keeps you on your feet. I would like to see more fan fiction where aang just rants about all he's lost and such. nothing can really compare and you took it to a new level. I feel like in the show they sort of brushed off the genocide and I would look to see more emotion from aang in the show then just happy. but its a cartoon for kids so I guess that doesn't work. anyways I'm going off track. I loved you detail and your writing I found it very easy to imagine and follow on what your saying. great job. I would totally continue reading if you created more.
bookworm51485 chapter 7 . 4/22/2017
Yeah, the concept is interesting, but your fan-worship of Katara is too evident in all aspects of this story and given that I can barely tolerate her as a character, I can't finish.
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