This was a steamy, complex interpretation of what could've happened after the movie's rather weak ending in my opinion. You've done a great job fleshing out all the characters in your story, especially Snow White and William Hammond, the latter of whom was a tragic hero that I couldn't help but sympathize with even though I was rooting for Eric the Huntsman to get together with the lovely queen herself. Some of your plot points were quite far-fetched and a little hard to accept at times, but I still loved your story as a whole! Also, I didn't like the names for the babies, especially Willa for the girl; I mean, William I can digest for a boy to honor his namesake but Willa? That's a little extra...

P.S. I really liked your descriptions of Snow White in this fanfic! She seemed so pathetic and bland in the movie though that could just be due to bad casting (Kristen Stewart was not the best choice to play the iconic role). Snow White is supposed to be a pure, beautiful, and iconic princess/queen, all of which you've showcased in your story so kudos to you!

snow seems like a slut going from one guy to the next not cool

Okay, Davelle, I'm not even going to lie.
This has been the absolute best fanfiction I have ever read.
There aren't many SWATH fanfictions out there, and I'm amazed by the amount of dedication you've put into this. The plotline was flawless, and always kept me on my toes. I had to pace myself to 2 chapters a night, or else I would never have gotten any sleep! (I even stayed up until 3AM tonight to finish the story, but SHH.)
I loved how you layered the plotline, so that the readers were given multiple things to think about while reading this.
(Ex- When we were on our toes thinking about who's child Snow's babe was, we had a bunch of outside things to worry about. What was Ravenna doing? Were William and Eric behaving? How was Snow faring with the pregnancy?)
I absolutely adored this story. If you have even the slightest idea of what to do for a sequel, I would give my winning lottery tickets for a sequel to this. William and Willa were absolutely adorable, and Malcom quickly became one of my favorite characters.
(After tall dark and handsome, and tall, blonde and handsome, of course!)
I apologize for this insanely long review, I just can't get over how much I love this story. I would have reviewed for each individual chapter, but I usually wait until the end to review, plus I didn't want to blow up your email. xD

If you're ever open to collaborating on a SWATH fanfiction, I would love to try and write one with you for fun. (Only if you're not to busy, that is.) I hope to read more from you soon, and I can't wait to talk more. Have a wonderful few days, and I hope you're faring well. Thank you for your dedication!

I agree with you! I was ticked off that snow didn't confront Eric at the end. Thank you for this lovely chapter. I'm going to continue reading now.

Wow this story was amazing, the whole plot with William and the Huntsman was more than great !

I really enjoyed your story... I wouldn't have named Snow's little girl Willa but I liked the name William for her little boy

-Rose&Dimitri_together4_ever

I really enjoyed this story! Great job!. It was well written, easy to read and had a great plot!

Never mind got sorted out. Still she needs a good bitch slap.

God the s**** a two timer, so much for being a rep of all thats good. Not criticizing you but dam she pisses me off.

I don't think the word "ok" existed in medevial times.

Thank you, thank you for writing this. I felt the same way when they didn't end up together! And I see that your writing is following that movie and not the book. I'm wondering if you read it, I would have liked for you to follow it. Even though the is little difference between the movie and the book, so this suits me just fine! I also happen to notice that unlike MOST fanfiction writers, you have an amazing talent!

Got me going there with all the drama; almost like the soaps LOL. I enjoyed your story.

please keep writing as much as much as much as you can on this story I LOVE IT! xoxoxoxoxoxox:)

Wonderful!

beautiful story, beautiful ending.