Reviews for A Whisper of Fire in the Vein
A Musing Brunette chapter 6 . 10/5/2016
You know, it is awful how innocent people get tortured by other people's jealousy and hatred. Rumors are such ugly things. And what's worse is that people in general are so willing to believe them. There aren't many people who are able to handle a situation of this magnitude well. I'm pretty sure most of us have endured a rumor or two about ourselves throughout our lives, but not something that has grown to this proportion.

I'm sure there were quite a few rumors flying around about me while I was in high school. I guess I was lucky enough to have the attitude about such things that I did because I either confronted some of them head on or just laughed/chided others off. Sure, some of them made a small dent, but in general they were all a bunch of bullcrap that my somewhat blunt demeanor called them how I saw it. Whether people believed me or not wasn't my concern, it was their problem. Oh, I remember some of the remarks I'd let out- "Wow. That is interesting to find out since I'm still a virgin... but I'm glad someone finally passed along the memo to me so that I'd be fully informed." "Really?! That's what I did this summer? Hmm, I must have teleported back home while I was on vacation 2,000 miles away."

I know that most people don't have the type of personality or demeanor I have. Everyone reacts differently to things, things affect different people in different ways. I'm not trying to downplay or minimize what this person went through. I commend them for living through it and being able to put their life back together. I wish more people would be able to do it. And I hope people realize that as hurtful as some words can be, if you just try to keep your emotions at bay and use logic and stop giving them power over you, you too can get through it. I also know that not every case is the same and, obviously, there are times when things are so awful and have grown to such immense heights that others need to get involved, including the police. Whatever the issue, I wish you well and hope that in the end you come out on top.

Thank you for sharing this story and for pointing out that it's not always just the rumor starters that are guilty, but also the bystanders that do nothing to try to stop the lies.
UltimateMalfunction chapter 6 . 7/31/2015
I liked this! It was interesting!
Shinnypichu88 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
but it's a rich high school, i don't think this stuff would happen (i think something similar might)
isfantasyandlovereal chapter 6 . 11/9/2012
AWW that's an amazing story
I love it
Thandail chapter 5 . 6/16/2012
This story makes me realize how sad it is when people listen to rumors and how it ends up hurting a person more in the end. I can't wait to read the happily ever after.
Hita-Chan chapter 5 . 6/11/2012
I'm as clueless as ever. Wow, I feel dumb! Wahhhh! Okay Can't wait till the next chapter!
Nimash chapter 5 . 6/10/2012
I think I've managed to piece together most of it, and I'm looking forward to what you have in store for the end. :)
Nimash chapter 4 . 6/9/2012
Wow. I read it up to Chapter 4 in one sitting, and I honestly don't know what to say. The story is amazing; truthful, raw, and if this is based on a true story, then I bow down to you for having gone through anything like this and then being able to write about it. I love your style, and I'm eagerly waiting for the next update.
Hita-Chan chapter 4 . 6/8/2012
Ah... I love this story. For some reason it keeps me entertained in the strangest of ways... Hm. I cant wait for the update!
Thandail chapter 4 . 6/8/2012
Poor Haruhi. At least she has the twins. It is very endearing how the twins try to comfort Haruhi.
loves2readandwrite chapter 3 . 6/6/2012
This is getting good! So much drama. I FREAKING LOVE IT!
Thandail chapter 3 . 6/6/2012
What did Kyouya gain? And where are the other hosts and how do they tie into the story?
Thandail chapter 2 . 6/5/2012
What in the world! What happened? What a sad start I hope everything gets sorted out and that Haruhi comes out the better/stronger person.
ChibiDevil098 chapter 2 . 6/4/2012
who is this bitch who keeps calling Haru-chan a slut? I WILL KILL HER!

update soon
loves2readandwrite chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Wow. AMAZING! Update soon. :)