NO!

Awesome story please review soon.

Update pls.

NO! CAS!

I'm not far into this but I really love it! Very well written!

Thank you, Cas!

And it's the Virgin Mary all over again...

(frowns in confusion)
What happens if a prophet commits suicide?

(whimpers)
Cas...dies?

Good story, but some translation for the Latin would be nice :)

Thos os really good! )

I'm sorry, but she's pathetic! Almost 15 years worth of abandonment and she's not even a speck angry. It doesn't make sense. Not mention how unrealistic her forgiveness is toward her dad. And there wasn't even a speck of resentment or jealousy towards the brothers who got to be raised by their dad without her. Also fucking unrealistic. No, its just like this "hey you abandoned me young and I grew up alone, but lets pretend everything's fine. And Sam and Dean, there isn't a drop of jealousy I feel that you got to be raised with dad together without me, and I don't resent you for not trying to find me, ever." TOTALLY. FREAKING. UNREALISTIC. Also, she's weak. She cries every five seconds. Whines about her crappy life and is irrationally attached to her brothers. For a grown ass woman, and certainly a Hunter, she's weak and her character is an equivalent to an angsty 12 year old.

Alright, 5 and a half chapters in and i had to stop. At first when i found this is was like wow, this is pretty well written for having so little reviews. Soooo i read. Not bad. Then we get to the second chapter. Dean and Sam see her for the first time after, what, 4 years? And they barely even acknowledge it. No, hey, what the HELL have you been doing, or WHY the Hell you've been gone so long, but no, she comes skippy doo da back into their lives like nothin ever happened, and there are no ill feelings towards her, shit, if i were to skip not even 10 paragraphs it's like she's been there that whole time, skippy doo da. Just unrealistic. But, i kept reading, thinking maybe the writer just didn't want to write out all the blah blah (even though it's very necessary blah blah). So i read, and it's alright. Although the lack of 4 years separated is disregarded entirely. And i get to chapter 5. Dean and Sam meet their sissy's boyfriend. Lol. There is noooo wayyy in hell they would be skippy doo da with any guy fuckin their lil sis. And the fact that he's a hunter? Dean would haaaate that. Idk. Just none of these characters are deep enough, and none of them have the reactions that they should have, if you correlate to their drama on the show. Ima stop readin this now. It's so long, and i really hate to think that you've got writing talent but u just keep writing so...WRONGLY. Kudos to my vocab, anyway. Cheers, bb i hope you've had some sort of epiphany.

You made me cry again... :( FANTASTIC chapter

I reaLLY like this story! I hope you aren'r going to leave it at this! Also, I was wondering if you were eventually going to make it Destiel, at times it seemed like it. WHatever you do I'm gonna look forward to it though!