So you been on Hiatus for three years when will it end please update I found this and I couldn't stop breathing tell the last chapter and now I'm a little miffed because it's nothing else to read so please if you're still in the land of the living and you're still writing and you're receiving your reviews please review this and give us an update of these chapters well you said that you would have three to four of them so I'm looking forward to reading those three to four updated chapters so please post ASAP

The story is great. The only problem I see so far is with your tenses. You seem to have trouble with switching between past and present tense, which creates an awkwardly worded sentence. If you fix that, the story would be golden. Keep it up!

I reall like this story you are taking time to explain how the events are healing her heart but without getting long winded. Also I am very good at spotting bloopers and I hardly saw any in this story mainly just the rare spelling error. But good luck can't wait to read more.

I loved the chapter, too perfect, especially the end with Okami asking for Kyoko allow Tisho torment Ren pouo or more, at least he has the courage to face any Taisho already had fled.

Lol it's cool how you're developing their relationship is very cute.

Curiously the next, so give updates, please.

Kiss.

Thanks for letting us know. I'd forgotten about this story, but this note bumped it up on my faves list and I enjoyed going back through it. : )

that is so how that chapter should have gone! way better than it being dragged out and Ren finally saying, 'I don't need to email when I can just call her'.

great story so far. Keep up the good work and update soon please.

I really love this story! Can't wait for next chapter! If it,s about song it can be "Turn me on" , "Heart of gold" James Blunt. I hope this will help you!

I like it! A fellow author loved your work, and has you as a favorite, now I see why! They were right about the wonderful quality of your work! I look forward to your next chapter!

This seems quite different from other fics I've read, it's nice to see Kanae, Chiori and the rest having such a strong impact in Kyoko's life (and things going good for her as well).

About Sho's PV, maybe it'll be easier to creat something yourself? Let's see, Kyoko was chosen for her ability to express feelings with her body language, but the director didn't know who was playing Bo, right? So maybe he was planning to having her hidden in a costume (In case she was a guy or something) and when he actually sees her, he decides to change his plans and show her... so it could be like, having Kyoko play the part of a doll that comes to life, like pinocchio? Like Rin Kagamine in Dolls? (Though that song doesn't fit Sho at all... )
If we are talking about Vocaloid, maybe the theme of Kaito's Cantarella would fit better? What with them being childhood friends, and he a total bast**** as well.

Anyway, sorry for ranting like that. I do like the story though .

Wow I am still impressed with this story! You are doing a good job of making it Skip Beatish enough that the reader can follow your characters train of thought and actions, but different enough that your story is still a good read without feeling like it is a knock off. I only have one question though. At the beginning of this chapter you said that "The driver explained that an older man had punched Sho while he was at school". I may be wrong, but I was under the impression that Sho isn't really going to school...he just told Shoko that he was going to a school? Really just to visit Kyoko more than a regular student...in your story is he going to be appearing as a student, or has he really been taken care of with lawsuits? lol I really just need to read the story to find out I guess...so you better hurry up and update, cuz these questions are going to drive me crazy.

CONTINUE DE STORY! PLZ! I REALLY LIKE IT... i have no complaints, just praise! xD thank u for this story, plz continue it... ill b looking forward 2 it!
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WAAAH! This story is so intriguing! I can't wait to read what happens next, so keep up the good work!

Haha! Ren getting evaluated by the taisho! XD AWSOME story so far! Can't wait till the next chapter!

Oh god I have no idea how I'm gonna handle waiting for the next chapter! And could you give me a chapter range of when the fluff comes in? Can't wait to see how they figure out their feelings or confess! Also i enjoy how ur story is more normal yet the cuteness is still present XD
Hope Shotaro stays away or gets told off and that there will be some uber cute RenxKyoko moments soon XD
- SBLuver592