loved this

Nice story..

Wonderful

Very sweet,heart-warming story! :) Just watch the spelling, reread to catch typos, and remember to use '''apostrophes'''! Btw, babies should be baby's, since it refers to something belonging to one baby.

Not a story I'd tell to a 3 year old child, but this was still lovely :')

While the idea was sweet, I think you could have made the ending of Harry's story a bit more reassuring. Personally, I think that story would make Lily fear her father dying because an evil wizard was after her. Also, Lily and James did not have Harry's eyes. Only Albus did. I feel that you should have kept that part out. Rowling made Harry's eyes very important and I think she had a reason for only giving one of Harry's children his eyes. Lots of spelling and grammar mistakes. With some editing, I think this could be a sweet addition to the HP fanfiction.