| Reviews for A Pinch of Dark Magic |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 3/19 This is my third time reading this. It's still great. |
 AGreatfulReader chapter 26 . 7/14/2019 Fantastic! This is how you write a mature fic correctly. It was initially irritating that Akiza went full nymphomaniac after joining with Yubel, but I love how you tied it back in to the overall plot of the story. Yusei was being pretty stupid at the beginning of this fic but I'm glad he gets his act together when he realizes just how much Akiza reciprocates his feelings. The angel vs devil interaction between Dark and Yubel was very well done. I really liked seeing Duel Spirits play a larger role with the main 5D's cast. The duel at the end was very well written. Overall, all of your 5D's fics make me very nostalgic: Yu-Gi-Oh definitely peaked with this series and I wish we could get some more time with this excellent cast! Kudos on a great narrative. I know you wrote this a long time ago, so I hope medical school worked out and life is currently treating you well. All the best! |
| Notros chapter 11 . 5/15/2019 ?pagepost&sview&id1210804 |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/27/2018 "Well i still think they're both bloody idiots." I burst out laughing at that. Awesome. |
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/24/2016 That was really good you are a master of the story telling art, and I'm not complaining or bashing your writing or anything but I would've liked it if Atem was brought up more and again still loved it Atem is just my favorite Yu-Gi-Oh character that's all. Thank you for the read and good luck with any future projects you might have in the future. |
| Nymphoftheglade chapter 26 . 9/17/2016 this is a really touching story |
| Notros chapter 4 . 9/5/2016 Akiza's bikini. ?pagepost&sview&id2916436 |
| Sister Of The Pharaoh chapter 26 . 5/25/2016 This is such an awesome story! So cute! Well done! |
| Fanfiction Review YouTube chapter 3 . 2/27/2016 Just started reading this, I was directed here from 'Sunset Horizon'. Your writing shows a lot of sophistication, didn't even pick up major mistakes. As for the story itself, very funny bringing in the Dark Magician Girl as a winggirl, haha. It is heading in a good direction. Looking forward to more chapters. |
| Aipom4 chapter 26 . 10/19/2015 That was beautiful but I wanted more of jack and car |
| Guest chapter 26 . 9/16/2015 great story |
| Raigat chapter 26 . 7/28/2015 Great story. Excellent plot, romance, and original,creative ideas. Good work. |
| Jt2champ chapter 18 . 7/13/2015 And she probably is. |
| Jt2champ chapter 17 . 7/13/2015 You better not make Carly die. You will receive a evil review. |
| A Whimsical Seishin chapter 1 . 5/14/2015 Interesting premise |
