real cute, could you continue it? you've got something here

Lady, (don't be offended, it's what i call everyone on the internet), you sure no how to write a story!

OMG I love this! Jealous Loki is so cute! Can't wait to see where you go with this story :).

very good start I do like it .

it is good. will there be more.

awesome you have a real talent there, don't stop writing!

I would really like to see you continue this story! :)

I love how it explains when they are little, but I say to make the story better is to put more detail and extend the ending where you can tell on both sides how they feel about each other

love it please write more of these

Love, love, love little Loki and I picture the one from the movie. Little Herja would be soooo cute! Do more please! Maybe they could do something with Idunn and the apples! Idunn is supposed to look and act like a 10 year old.

Wow. That's cool.

Aww... This is cute! I don't know if I'll like 'Guardian of the Princes', but this was nice. :D

Awww :3 so cutttteee, little Herja is just so adorable :D and Loki, always michevious- planning his brothers fall into the pond. Well I guess his plans will be on hold, now, because of Herja ;3

So cute. Love him! And poor Herga, having to listen to Thor ramble! :)

I loved it!