i dont really like fics without linda in but i love this. please carry on:) xx

oo I like this! :-)

I like that you wrote in the first person it seemed like more realistic haha :')

Please update soon xx

Great!

LM xx

think this is a really good story!

Promising start.

LM xx

i think you should continue with it as it is a good start. there are a few of these types of stories on here but i reckon if you keep going yours could be one of the better ones:)xx