This is really good, keep writing!

Welp.

Hope you update soon!

Aw, good luck man!

I love this so far and poor Pit at the end. Navi why the reset bomb I don't think that going to work. 0-0

I loved this fanfic... Until the gay love this started up...I think I'm going to be sick...

Anyways, I love your writing skill, keep up the good work

Aww, poor Pit! ;_;

Grrrr.… death to DZ… evil evilevilevilevilevil!

I'm sorry to hear about the personal issues… does it have anything to do with your closing your DeviantART? ( :( )

Oh… oh god… PIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!

Oh man, that suuuuuuucks… I hope he gets better soon :( (and poor Pittoo too!)

Wow, you weren't kidding when you said that you would update soon! *amazed*

Sorry I didn't respond, I didn't check my email after school…

No… PIT!
Th- they'll rescue him, right? Right?

I think you do a good job characterizing Link, it seems like he'd be that type of guy. :) Thanks for updating so soon!

:D Link!
Phew, he's alive, thank goodness. It'll be nice to have him back.
(And more Pittoo/Pitt fluffiness! ;))
Thanks for updating!

is link going to come back? because i know hes not dead if he was dark link would be dead to because hes his dark half, just like if pit dies so does dark pit.

Ahh Pit and Pittoo are so adorable
Cliffies are okay, I haven't updated my own stories in forever…

this is an awesome story so far i can t wait for the next one. and im curious to see if pit will get the power of fight and be able to fly on his own

The only reason it makes no sense now is because I haven't fixed that plot hole of flight that will be resolved in the next episode, so thanks!

It makes no sense