I'm crying! I am not kidding, I'm crying! Should I? It's just... Lucy sounds so sad yet determined! *Sniff* Great story! I'm going to go now.

XOXO

Mizu-chan ;3

beautiful

3.3 Speechless...and satisfied. (Well, not really speechless, if you've got somethin' to say, ey? xD)
There were some writing errors (ex. repetition of the subject in a sentence; missing words in a sentence, etc.) here and there but I still understood the story. Keep up the good work.

I almost cried,,

great job! please do more, ne?

GANBATTE

Awwww this story is cute :) hope you write more like this.

AWWWW that was sooooo cute! I loved it!