Reviews for Coming to an end |
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Moonraven81 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012 i really enjoyed this story, severus is so sweet when hes apologizing |
Bodom's Nightmare chapter 1 . 6/11/2012 That was really cute; a bit confusing at first, but still very sweet. :) Keep writing! |
Crayonbird chapter 1 . 6/10/2012 Good story overall. There are a few glitches. For instance, the sentence: It may have been about finding information at first but – but after a while I found myself drawn to me... doesn't make sense. I suspect you meant to write ...myself drawn to you... Perhaps some proof-reading will benefit your writing and make a more polished story. |
Leslie chapter 1 . 6/10/2012 A lovely one-shot! I really enjoyed reading it so thank you for sharing! :) |