Good story. I even like how you brought Roddy & Holly into the story.

Is there a sequel, plz tell me there's a sequel because the ending made me all giddy.

~xLunaxNightingalexDuskx

Excellent story.

this was pretty good. i hope you write more grimm stories like it. im sure theyd rock

Just found this story, oh, there is suspense and unanswered questions so I guess sequel?

Great close, well done! Really hard to wrap up tidily but you did a great job! Good sense of lurking threat at the end there. I liked the news report as a means of showing what happened to poor devenue and the sneaky monrosie kiss. Xxxx

Wow, big fight! Badass nick! I love it when you send him into battle. You do it so well :)

Eeeeeek! Don't leave it there, you fiend! Good energy in this chapter! Please don't choke my lovely nick too hard :(

Nooooooo! Rescue Monroe and rescue him quick!

Poor holly, she's having a nightmare time!

I thought you paced this chapter really well and i was particularly enjoying the diversion scene. Really tidily done!

Thank you! Anyways, love the Roddy/Holly romance! Is that Rolly or Hoddy? ;D

Hey! I love this story! But maybe more MonRosalie? You don't have to but... PLEASE!

Abend is just creepy! Poor Rosalee. Talk about going from frying pan to fire. Am enjoying the uncertainty of not quite knowing what side renard is on...

Great twist!

You portray Rosalee and roddy so nicely. Keep this going, am really enjoying.