But he doesn't know that she's his daughter.

This story was awesome. I really enjoyed it. You should of made this more than a two-shot. I think this story tells a really good plot! Please if you could make a squeal to this or something!

Please write more

I know this has been up for like two months but I'm just now getting the time to actually read fan fiction again - anyway, this was cute but it moved so fast…I think I would have liked it even more if you had slowed it down and showed their friendship grow first before her completely forgiving him because he did run away and while it's kind of understandable it isn't completely forgivable she didn't really get a chance to fully explain herself and her reasons - he just kind of sprung it on her and then left…I think having her ask him to join her as a friend in going to the party rather than her date would have made it better and kind of more realistic if they want to build a relationship that could last…this isn't just because I think it'd make such a good story if it were longer than two chapters, which it would, I just think it has the potential to go from a good story to an amazing story - maybe it's just because I have a tendency to enjoy stories more when it's more realistic to life than ones that just jump right into things…I can watch all the fast paced drama on TV and love it because it's only a half hour show and it wouldn't be exciting if it went slow on TV, but as a writer you have so much more opportunity than TV to show the progression of emotions without it getting boring because you can really express with words how they feel which a show can't because in a story you can get into a character's mind and show all of the thoughts and feelings they have all a show has is facial expressions and what they admit to other characters, you can actually take the time to show it, unlike a TV show based solely around teenage drama...don't think that I don't like the story because I really do, I'm just saying that I couldn't see her just accepting his apology so quickly and right off the bat hinting to him that they have a strong chance of getting back together…people change in six years, whether it's a lot or a little people do change and I think that they kind of need to explore that and take it slow…sorry for the really long review, I give my opinions freely and it always seems to result in a long review for some reason - anyway, I loved the story and am definitely happy that I read it I'm just giving you this review because I think your story has so much potential to be even better…I could go on but I'll stop there, you're a great writer and I loved the story :)

Loved it!(:

Never stop writing! This story is just too cute. So much Eclare fluff! Ahhh! Your story was basically flawless except for the fact there wasn't much spacing to indicate the starting of your paragraphs. But overall, I really did enjoy this story as well as your others :3

That was amazing! I can't wait to read more of your stories :)

I loved it :)

that was beautiful *tear* )

This was great! Loved it!

I agree with the others I would love to hear more of this story. I really enjoyed this story

Love it!

Please continue!:)

This was sooooo an amazing writer. Its too bad this was a one shot. I can see a lot happening...like eliza father comes back...an old gf from new york shows up all stalker like...the up and downs of their relationship...god it would have been even more amazing! :-)

I really enjoyed the chapter and I can't wait to read more.

Can't wait for more!