Wow. This is new! I'm not quite used to such a story, but it's nice nonetheless. My favorite part about this story is that you have such different people come together in such a way. I mean, both of them are notorious for their strong characters. To have them collide like this startled me yet pleased me. Very nice job!

Aww this is sweet. I love these two together. I love how he calls her out on lying but still manages to compliment her on her cleverness in the same breath. It's very Slytherin. haha. The scene you set in the beginning is very fitting for this conversation. I also like this characterization of Rowena and how unsettled she is by Salazar. I picture her as the confident type in most areas of life but relationships are probably not her strong suit. Really well done with this couple. :)

Alright, I confess, I have been a Rowena/Salazar shipper ever since I wrote a fic on them for a challenge once, so I was inspired to read it :P This was sweet. It was very well written it honestly made my heart melt with 'awwws. I like your description and the setting you chose. And it made it even more interesting with the fact that it was when they barely knew each other.

I'm not sure how to describe it, but there was just something about it that I really enjoyed. I'm going to favourite it. You're a good writer.

Okay, so I've always been a fan of Rowena/Salazar, and I must say, you did a great job with them! I loved this! It sounds very...Rowena. I like how you included her nervousness, and I love how you characterized her. Spelling and grammar were great. Wonderful work! :D

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I have a soft spot for Rowena and Salazar, so I had to read this! I really liked how you gave both characters a lot of life and personality in such a short amount of words. The story was really cute, and I love how he knew when she was lying. I enjoyed this.

This was great. i never really think of the Founders as people you know? they seem so far in the past that i can't really wrap my head arouns thm. btu you really gave them some life. I have to say it would be very hard to be in any sort of relationship with Slytherin, regardless of love and all that. he just seems too easy to lose. As though you blink and he's gone. I wish Rowena a lot of lukc with that man. I have to say, seeign Gryffindor as Godric just makes his name that much worse, i always think of the last name because it doesn;t sound so ridiculous, well not to me anyway. I like how Slytherin was so distant, yet at the same time intimate. It was fabulous how you were able to balance that out. Great story i really enjoued reading it.

I always wonder what the relationships were like among the founding four. You have written a nice little story with believable dialog and emotions. I would love it if you were to turn this into a longer piece.

Good Job