Reviews for A Twin Thing |
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![]() ![]() AWW ROSE AND HIM ARE SO CUTE DO U THINK BELLA WILL BE IN THIS STORY OR ANYONE ELSE JASPER WILL BE INTERESTED IN |
![]() ![]() I love how u started this but I hate jaspers parents I am also surprised you used Rose instead of Bella because she is always in this story but maybe this will make it better I don't really like Bella very much she is to clingy and whines to much so who is Jasper going to be with is it still Edward or are you changing it to Emmett |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you given up on this story? I hope not I really want to see how things work out for Jasper and Edward! |
![]() ![]() ![]() J'ai été ravie de voir que tu avais écrit un nouveau chapitre qui s'avère tout aussi réussi que les autres mais il m'a fallu relire toute l'histoire pour me réimprégner des personnages d'où ce commentaire tardif. Jasper a besoin de beaucoup de temps et d'aide pour être sûr d'interpréter chaque paroles de Rose et d'Edward de la bonne manière et ainsi éviter des incompréhensions mutuelles et des disputes évitables. Il s'avère que parfois c'est Edward qui a besoin de temps et peut-être de réfléchir avant de parler mais sur le coup de l'émotion les mots ne sont pas toujours ce qu'ils devraient être, heureusement ce dernier a vite fait amende honorable et justifié ses paroles précédente en montrant son inquiétude par la possibilité d'avoir pu perdre Rose. Ceci dit j'ai beaucoup aimé également leurs taquineries mutuelles et les différentes réactions surtout de Jasper dans le début du chapitre. Ce chapitre était magnifique. Merci et à bientôt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see you back hun! Jasper is finally starting to see thingscas they really are. Too bad he had to sacrifice his car to do it! |
![]() ![]() :) good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, poor Edward. At least jasper is now fighting his own corner, that's a step forward for him and he didn't even think about losing Edward. It was good for him to see Edwards vulnerable side too, I'm sure that will help jasper to understand that everyone has insecurities and vulnerabilities - he just takes them to the extreme. It makes you want to seriously harm the people who brought him up and damaged him so badly. Thks for the update, i hope things are better for you, Debbie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter, and I'm so happy to see this story back! Your dialogue is so perfect. Loved it. Nancy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chappie...'were good'! Thank you, I've missed you and your lemony and limey cast of characters! and, NO, I'm not saying that they are...tarts ;P although, I love tarts! ;} Mmmm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww! and naughty rose for taking jasper's car. glad she's okay though. wonder what edward did at jasper's laptop? hmmm... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Love these guys. Hoping Jasper has some good luck with his job search. Wonder what he will do with the name change. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good to have your story back, loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw Jasper's trying, good for him. I love seeing how he views things compared to how it really is. I missed this story. Great job. thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this fic and hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update! |