Next chapter is so long its fallen into infinity and reversed its own existence.
I loved your story dear but its a shame you never continued it, it was an interesting read for a few hours on a Friday night.

Absolutely loved this story! Please continue when you can

To be honest, after reding the first chapter Yumi seems slightly Mary Sue. Mind, this is just the first chapter and it's probably to early to judge, but it might turn of a lot of people.

Hi there! Just commenting to say I love your story. I actually haven't read it all yet, but I'm impatient, so yeah. I'll just comment now and again when I've caught up. I love Yumi. You do a really good job of making her an interesting and believable character, and your writing is awesome.

This story is wonderful. I love Yumi's character. :D I'm anticipating Yumi, Kakashi and Naruto's run-in with Akatsuki - u - update soon, mon ami

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Continue!

More! 3

Ahh, after not being able to read for months, I'm back to reading! I must say, I know I was loving the story before, but it must have left a lasting impression on me because I didn't have to do any backtracking or quickly flicking through chapters to remember what was happening! The minute I started reading, it was a case of 'Oh yes, I remember everything!' Shame the same can't be said for Yumi ;)

As usual, brilliantly written. The cliffhanger at the end of this chapter has got me VERY excited for what's soon to come! And I have to say, Tsunade throwing the desk in the previous chapter almost killed me!

Oh my dear frikken Jashin. Update already. I love this story!

I LOVE IT! :D

Oh those darn cliffhangers! BTW awesome chapter! It's getting very Very VERY good! :D

:D yayayayay! I was so happy to open my email and see that a new chapter had arrived! Good chapter too! Though short... but oh well! :D

OMG! OMG! :O You're evil because there's not another chapter for me to read! UGH! This story is so interesting! XD I just wanna read what will happen, since Tobi obviously doesn't like her, but everyone else does! Please update!

this is so awesome!
please update soon!

Awesome! Update soon!